FIC EXERCISE: It was a day unlike any other
Hey guys, I have been working on improving my writing skills and with the help of my teacher x-erikah-x I'm gonna write awesome Fanfics.
This is my first exercise, comment on it!
It was a day unlike any other
The sun was going down in an explosion of reddish colors. I was beside my son and I could feel his emotions. The day had been so tiny for everything we wanted to do, but the smile in his face told me that we had done enough.
I couldn’t take the face that he did when a clown gave him a balloon at the carnival off of my mind. A blue small balloon that he now carried around as part of him. I wonder if I should have done the same with him. In that moment, in the end of that Sunday afternoon, I knew that I was loved. He touched my hand and glanced at me.
I looked back. I was counting the minutes. His mother would be there to take him in a moment and I couldn’t lose the chance to say it. I approached him and hugged.
“I love you”, it was all that would leave my mouth.
This is my first exercise, comment on it!
It was a day unlike any other
The sun was going down in an explosion of reddish colors. I was beside my son and I could feel his emotions. The day had been so tiny for everything we wanted to do, but the smile in his face told me that we had done enough.
I couldn’t take the face that he did when a clown gave him a balloon at the carnival off of my mind. A blue small balloon that he now carried around as part of him. I wonder if I should have done the same with him. In that moment, in the end of that Sunday afternoon, I knew that I was loved. He touched my hand and glanced at me.
I looked back. I was counting the minutes. His mother would be there to take him in a moment and I couldn’t lose the chance to say it. I approached him and hugged.
“I love you”, it was all that would leave my mouth.