Breaking Bad Fic: Killing Time (Just Don't Leave), Parts 1-2

[readishmael]

Fandom: Breaking Bad
Title: Killing Time (Just Don't Leave)
Author: readishmael 
Pairing: Walt/Jesse
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~20,750
Spoilers: Through 3x13, “Full Measure”
Disclaimer: This is for fun, not for profit. No copyright infringement is intended. Breaking Bad belongs to Vince Gilligan, AMC, and Sony Television.
Warnings: Angst; emotional abuse; serious

Comments

[fakepoptart]

Oooo looking great already!! The scene in the kitchen at the end is even more awesome than I remember it, and the banter is spot-on as always. Great stuff. 'Bout time I re-read it, too.

And holy hell, S4 premier this Sunday! This revised fic should be the perfect thing to get me back into the midest for BB, haha.~

[readishmael]

Thanks for re-reading and commenting. Glad it lives up to the memory.

And OMG I know, it's almost here!

[sydpenguinbunny]

Oh my God, THIS. This has made my night. Cannot wait to read the rest of this tomorrow (before "Salud"! *dissolves into a puddle of worried-for-Jesse*) So much that I love about this... Awkward sex, awkward morning after, a kiss that I squeed at, poor Jesse breaking my heart because it's so obvious that he needs to be wanted very much <3 Rawwr so much awesome in here. *glomps story* That was probably rambly, but just... love. Love love love :D

[readishmael]

Thanks so much! I, uh...hope you still feel the same way when you see where it goes, if anything here really made you squee.

poor Jesse breaking my heart because it's so obvious that he needs to be wanted very much

And will damage himself in whatever way he has to to be able to feel that. Poor, sweet, screwed-up boy.

[sydpenguinbunny]

Well, I have a distinct feeling that Walt/Jesse is likely to always end badly, as I don't know if they're necessarily conducive to fluff... It's all very dysfunctional but... necessary :D

*hugs Jesse* I know :( Jesse is in desperate need of affection. We need a Hug Jesse Pinkman Association. :D

[readishmael]

No, they're not conducive to fluff, at least when you extend the timeline. Fluffy moments or scenes, maybe, with proper justification, but not for the whole course of a relationship.

We need a Hug Jesse Pinkman Association. :D

And like 99% of BB fans would join. He'd have no time for anything else except to gets hugs.

[diane_kepler]

I've finally gotten around to reading this story, or rather retreading and commenting, since I was too interested in the story to comment the first time around. I adore how long this is. You've obviously put a lot of time into this and worked very hard. Thanks for bringing it to light beccause it's such a treat to read.

The thing I like most about this part is the repeated misunderstandings. The stops and starts and how they're both as prickly as hedgehogs the whole damn time. That makes it feel like canon to me. Well, that and the facts that Walt constantly whipsaws about his feelings. One minute he wants to just strangle Jesse and the next . . .

One thing that confused me though was their positions on the couch. I don't se how they could be sitting side by side one minute and Walt could be feeling Jesse's erection the next.

[readishmael]

Thanks for commenting; glad you enjyed it.

Re: their positions, as Jesse dozes off, he turns in toward Walt so he's lying on his hip instead of sitting flat, which works in my head because he's so short. It wouldn't be comfortable even then, but he's not in that position for that long.

[gogosai]

OMG！I love this wonderful fic!just finished read all the stories in this(Killing Time) series，and it's fantabulous！
Walt is always such a DICK(lol) the words he said to Jeese were so "him",and Jeese,the cute poor kid,he didn't know what he really wants（when he thought all the touching from Mr White were so werid，he's so cute！）and I love the way he kept saying "I don't know" to Mr White.
This fiction don’t feel like a fiction but a real story!so ture,it's like the scenes cut from one episode，I'm amazed by your fic totally！
SO there goes，Can I translate this fiction into Chinese and put it on the internet？of course you will be named as the author，and when I put it on,I will sent your the link as sonn as possible.
Can'T wait for your response！:) thank you

[readishmael]

Thanks so much for the very kind review. You absolutely have my permission to translate the fic; I'm so flattered that you think it's worth the effort. Good luck with that process, and have fun.