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Mar 30, 2008 09:19

title: Scramble part1? (Hibari vs. Gokudera/Uh picture them in their late teens, kay?)
rating: PG-13
sample: "They're just like dogs. Snarling, hissing, growling as they wrestle each other into the ground."

Wrote this for the kink meme but I-I can't find it in my heart to complete it... it's fine the way it is.
it’s not a relationship as much as rivalry run amuck // 472 words )

katekyo hitman reborn, fanfiction, hibari/gokudera

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howla April 2 2008, 23:07:24 UTC
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! *friendz*

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theburningempty October 1 2008, 03:03:54 UTC
glad you liked!

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inaweofshe April 3 2008, 03:32:53 UTC
SO AWESOME.

-SOME.

GAH.

Oh man, I don't know when part two's comin' out, but I really really REALLY love this; Hibari and Gokudera is one of my guilty pairings, and it'd just be so angry and bloody and VIOLENT <3

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Realization dawned on him like a deer caught in the headlights of a freight train when a smirk curled Hibari’s pale lips. A tongue darted out but wet them slow and it’s like a period to punctuate Gokudera’s death sentence.

He was a herbivore no more in the eyes of Hibari Kyouya."

My favorite part.

*_* Thanks for writin' this <3 <3 <3

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theburningempty October 1 2008, 03:04:51 UTC
Y SO GUILTY? The dynamics are awesome so I see no reason for shame <3

And thank you :D

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kinoko14 April 12 2008, 03:35:57 UTC
There needs to be more 1859 in this world <3
Thanks for writing this.
It was awesome

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theburningempty October 1 2008, 03:05:15 UTC
yes there does *n*

glad you liked it, haha!

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blood_corsair March 5 2009, 05:21:44 UTC
Ah, so YOU'RE the one who wrote this! :D I read it in the meme forever ago! It's always nice to stumble across anons, especially when they're talented writers. <3

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theburningempty March 21 2009, 13:10:37 UTC
ajkfks thank you for the kind words ;; <3

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crazy_ryzz March 23 2009, 09:01:23 UTC
Oooohm, that was delicious! XD So violent and angry AND OHMG, SO HOT! Just pure love. Your style to write is... awesome. I can`t find other words. <3

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theburningempty March 24 2009, 02:26:15 UTC
Aww thanks so much! I haven't done fight scenes much, good to know I'm on the right track *_*

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