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[theburningempty]

title: Lights Off (Hibari/Gokudera, past Dino/Hibari // almost TYL)
rating: R
sample: Your mouths collide (Pure abstract mockeries of a kiss. They're too empty mean anything.) Your limbs tangle, skin slides against skin without even a shread of intimacy.

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[evocates]

/LICKS

I left a comment back in the hibagoku kink meme, but I will leave one here too. Since I love you so much.

I love the contrast between the Hibari now and the Hibari before. The weight of all the things implied and unsaid, everything so subtle and so heavy in the air between them. There's a tension in here there's beautiful and almost deadly, because if Gokudera opens his mouth Hibari will leave and perhaps-maybe he will die because of Hibari's anger.

I love Hibari's reaction in the end - forced impartiality and leaving, just like he always does. It's such a contrast to the fic itself, and Gokudera seems so lost and this is Hibari yet it isn't and just- wow. Just. Wow mmmm.

♥♥ ilubb. So much.

AND I NEED A 1859 ICON BECAUSE YOU'RE MAKING ME SHIP THE PAIRING SO MUCH. RDFHDFJ I RETALIATION HAVE A 8018

[theburningempty]

/EW

but aw u <3 you're making me blush here. And yeah that makeshift camaraderie is so full of unsaid understanding that lets them keep both their distance- fjslfajk I need to explore more of it. It's a freaking practicallyuntouched playground.

ILU2 AND GET ONE ALREADY. GIVE IN TO YOUR URGE. And lol I ship 1880 so we're even now. GET OVER IT~ /o/

[jusrecht]

OH MY GOD.

This hurts, and not in a good way but I love it anyway. I love how detached Gokudera's voice in this, insinuating that it's what it took for him to go along with the charade. And HIBARI OMFG HIBARI. I can't comment on him, my D18 fangirl side is still crying in a corner.

And what Gokudera said at the end, it's like a rock hitting me on the face. Ouch, but thank you for writing this amazing piece anyway.

[theburningempty]

AWWW sorry, I- I just love writing angst. The complicationss, the molten interactions that burn and freeze at the same time *dreamy sigh* I'm very glad you picked up on Gokudera <3 Hibari's always been so unshakable and to see such a side of him- it's so awkward and invasive and tmi.

And lol mine is constantly in the corner, the ship's so doomed with Dino's family obligations but I LOVE IT SO HARD ANYWAY~

Thank you for the kind words *u* <33

[tyreling]

asdfghjkl;! Too amazing! I'm not too sure if I can resist this pairing anymore.

[theburningempty]

glad you liked *u*
and my advice: don't <333

[erisabesu]

Saw this on the meme! Brilliant work. Guuh.

[theburningempty]

aww thanks C:

[agentlerain]

Damn what a hit of emotions in just less than 400 words! I love the description, the lack of emotion in Hibari and then the comparision between making love and fucking. Haha, Gokudera's last words also bring a smile to your face, lessening the angst of the situation. :3 :3 Added to memories!

But one can't help but think that a marriage isn't really going to stop Hibari from taking what he wants. :|