Nevertheless, I still managed to make something dirty out of it -- "wait for sun's grand shadows to give length" makes it sound like they get hard-ons in the sun, to me.
P.S. if there's a way you could compile a list of all your past poetry reviews, sortable by date, author, and (MOST importantly) your rating (A through F), that would be wonderful. I would especially love to see more A rating bad poems, or at least more easily be able to find the ones you've already reviewed.
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Thanks!
Personally, I don't think the poem is that bad, although I'm no connoisseur, and it isn't to my taste.
haha I just noticed the bit about the "novelty-sized frying pan". Nice touch!
So, double thanks!!
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But... don't bend over backwards on my account.
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