Iambic Tetrameter, Sonext_784312September 11 2011, 08:24:42 UTC
Hey prof, the word "do" actually looks very necessary from a metrical perspective. Those are iambs, four of them to a line, which makes this a much more technically adept poem than what you generally target.
I agree that the last stanza is a pile of warm goo but you can't go maligning formalism. I mean, you can, but it makes you look kind of ignorant.
Other than that, I appreciate what you do here. Keep fighting the fight, gov.
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I agree that the last stanza is a pile of warm goo but you can't go maligning formalism. I mean, you can, but it makes you look kind of ignorant.
Other than that, I appreciate what you do here. Keep fighting the fight, gov.
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