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Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 5

Apr 08, 2009 17:40

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 5
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: PG-13 / T (might change to NC-17 / M later)
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

( Proceed to Chapter 5 )

fanfiction: update, jasper, alice

Comments 8

frust_sheep April 8 2009, 21:57:12 UTC

Oh love the beginning, the song is awesome and a really nice entrance to the fanfic. Great choice ( ... )

realynn8 April 9 2009, 18:14:09 UTC

You can't even imagine how happy your reviews always make me. :) If I didn't get any reviews at all, it would be all worth writing it only for you. *hug*

I am really glad you liked the song, I thought it fitted well. I think Alice and Jasper are in a really confused place right now, they want to trust each other and help each other, but at the same time, that is really hard for them, because they have been so hurt and feel betrayed by another. But they will get there, sooner or later.

My mind is also constantly in the gutter. :) You should see me write these chapter, the scenarios that that go through my mind - constantly. :) And I will get to the gutter too, again sooner or later. :)

You are beyond adorable. Rosalie will be in the next chapter, and I have some shopping coming up too. I have it already written, so it should be up soon next week. :)

frust_sheep April 10 2009, 10:25:00 UTC

Oh that's so nice. :) *hug*

Yeah, the song fitted really well. I think it was so good for the mood. I did not know it before, so I learned something new. :D
Oh yeah these two are so confused, but I think they are on the right way to get through this.

And *lol* to the gutter. Sometimes for me it's hopeless with my mind...so in the first place I don't try anything else. *lol*

Yeah Rosalie and shopping in the next chapter, this will be so much fun. I think especially for Jasper. *lol* I'm so excited already. :D

realynn8 April 10 2009, 13:51:31 UTC

I am glad you found a new song you like. :) New songs are always a good thing.

It is hard not to have your minds in the gutter, especially when Jasper is involved. :) I am there all the time.

It is so great that you are excited. That makes me excited. And then we are both excited. *jumps up and down*

applecandy22 May 1 2009, 04:04:33 UTC

so well written!

realynn8 May 1 2009, 09:20:20 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!

pamela0201 May 18 2009, 11:18:20 UTC

I love your Jasper, he is so cute!

"What do you want for breakfast?”

You. Where did that came from? Freaking hormones."
This made me laugh, Can't really blame her though lol

I can see Drama, well more drama, on the horizon now with Rose.

realynn8 May 18 2009, 12:07:41 UTC

He is, isn't he. :)

Oh yes, I completely agree with Alice, too. He is yummy.

Drama is definitely coming, yup.