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Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 6

Apr 15, 2009 18:12

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 6
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: PG-13 / T (might change to NC-17 / M later)
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

( Chapter 6 )

fanfiction: update, jasper, alice

Comments 12

frust_sheep April 16 2009, 22:00:53 UTC

Like I said before, I love that you build up this story and that is not rushed. :) And I think this is very clear in this chapter, that they need their time to get out of this mess. So the look in their heads were really brilliant again ( ... )

realynn8 April 17 2009, 07:06:53 UTC

Thank you so much for such a lovely review! Have I ever mentioned before how much I like your reviews? :) When I saw in my inbox you posted to this chapter, I got all excited. I always like to hear what you think.

I am glad you liked the song. I had troubles picking this one, but I think it fits.

I wanted to introduce Rosalie in this chapter and show that she really shares a deep bond with Jasper. But because I like to complicate things for myself, I will show in the next chapter she also has a connection with Alice, so this mess will get even messier.

I made Alice breakdown during the shopping scene to show how sad the situation really is. I mean, shopping is Alice's favorite activity and she breaks down during it? Sad. But Jasper was there to make it all better. :) I am really glad you liked it.

The family visit is coming up in a couple of chapter. I am still deciding what will happen. And how. :)

Thank you so so much. *hugs*

frust_sheep April 19 2009, 01:37:48 UTC

Yes, you have, thanks, I'm really glad you like them. *hug* :)

Yeah, I think also the song fits very well.
Oh and I will enjoy Rosalies part again, I'm so sure and I can really believe that she also has to say something to Alice. So messier is good. *lol* Oh and great to know, with the family. :D

Oh yes and if Alice can not enjoy her fav activity, then is really something wrong. So this was really believable. :)

realynn8 April 19 2009, 08:41:49 UTC

Thank you. :)

andre07hsm April 22 2009, 07:57:35 UTC

OMG!!
I love it!!
I readed the 6 cap in one night!!!!

please continue!!!!

realynn8 April 22 2009, 08:18:49 UTC

Thank you so much! You made my day. :)

The next chapter should be up soon. I hope you keep reading and reviewing. :)

And I am really glad you like it.

applecandy22 April 30 2009, 05:03:13 UTC

this is waaay cool!
so sweet!

realynn8 April 30 2009, 07:53:42 UTC

Thank you so much, I am glad you like it. The whole list of chapter is on the left side of my journal, the 7th is already up as well. :) Enjoy!

applecandy22 April 30 2009, 23:33:59 UTC

yay!!! thanks for telling me!

realynn8 May 1 2009, 09:16:26 UTC

You are very welcome. :) Thanks for liking my story.

pamela0201 May 18 2009, 11:50:08 UTC

I am loving Jasper more and more with every chapter.
Can't wait for the others to visit Alice.

realynn8 May 18 2009, 12:08:31 UTC

Thank you so much. :)