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realynn8

Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 10

May 17, 2009 17:03

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 10
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

( Chapter 10 )

jasper, fanfiction, alice

Comments 32

aliceandjazzz May 18 2009, 18:50:11 UTC

This was a lovely chapter :). I was excited to see Rose and Carlisle and Esme. I think it's was extra special for Alice that Carlisle delivered baby Amber Rose, and I loved how you showed the connection between Alice and Rose with the baby's name. And I love it when Jasper calls Alice "darlin". I can hear it in my head and it's so hot! Great job, as always :)

realynn8 May 18 2009, 18:58:56 UTC

Thank you so much, I am really glad you liked it. :) I just had to bring Carlisle and Esme in, and then I decided to do the same with Rosalie. I am glad you approve.

Jasper is quite hot, and when he says darlin' in his southern drawl, I swoon every time. ;)

Thanks for the lovely review.

applecandy22 May 19 2009, 22:25:55 UTC

I really loved the last few lines. It's what I've been waiting for the entire time. Now they can be happy! I wanna see some blush worthy times now!
This was an amazing and well crafted addition to the story line. I want to read more!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!

realynn8 May 20 2009, 08:02:56 UTC

Thank you so much, I am really glad you liked it. *squee* Yeah, I wanted the story to shift a little and things have been set into motions. They answer are coming and some major fluff, too.

applecandy22 May 20 2009, 22:32:18 UTC

I am so excited!!!!
I want to read it!!!!

ladysaruman May 23 2009, 15:11:19 UTC

Hehe, popping in here to comment in support of you :)
You know, I think I just might make a rec to this story in my own next chapter, make some of my buddies over on FF read your story :D

realynn8 May 23 2009, 15:17:42 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! *hugs* That means a lot to me.

I can't wait to continue reading your story as well, but I am patient and will wait. :) But you did end it with quite a cliffy, if I remember correctly. ;)

frust_sheep May 24 2009, 01:07:19 UTC

Yeah, now the review for chapter 10. I know I'm late again, but I hope it's ok ( ... )

realynn8 May 24 2009, 09:19:40 UTC

What a perfect way to start a Sunday morning ( ... )

frust_sheep May 24 2009, 14:18:23 UTC

I'm pleased, that I could help you to have a good Sunday morning ( ... )

realynn8 May 24 2009, 16:09:32 UTC

You have the album? I have it, too. I loved Creed and was disappointed when they broke up, but I still like Alter Bridge now, it is the same group minus the singer Scott Stapp. Have you heard of it?

Yes, more is coming in a couple of chapters, things have been set into motion. :) You'll see what I mean tomorrow, when I update.

Thank you so so much, you can't even imagine what your words mean to me. *hugs*

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