Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 16
Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 16
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.
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they always say there is something around the corner. I like that we can get more of Alice's back story and hopefully secret rendezvous w/ Cynthia to make amends!
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Thank you so much for such a lovely review again. :) It made my day so much better and more relaxed. :)
I'm glad you liked it that Jasper feels better. I thought he has been through a lot already and didn't need more troubles. Especially since some might come later.
I'm so happy you think it's a lot like Alice. :) Woohoo! :)
You are such a great reader, making me happy all the time. I really felt like Jasper needed to kiss her, when I was writing that scene. I felt like he was absorbed by her, especially since this was all new again. :)
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I like their bed time. ;)
And I needed to resolve some past issue. I wrote them into the story for a reason and I needed to explain them. I don't know, I just always feel that everything has to mean something, that there has to be a reason for everything. :)
Aww, thank you so much sweetie. You make me blush and also ridiculously happy. :)
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Oh yeah, I so agree about Jasper and troubles, especially when some more come later. Ui, so my mind will be busy again. ;) *lol*
Oh yep, I really think that. :)
Oh yes honey, I have so to agree on that point again. It just felt so right and natural in that scene, that he wanted to kiss her. :)
The bed time oh yeah, me too. ;D
I really love your thoughts about it, that there has to be a reason for everything and you really wrote this all so wonderful and pefect. I really cherish that. :)
So I guess you liked part 1. That's great and make me happy, too. :)
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LOL I so want to say and tell you, but I can't, I don't want to spoil you about anything.
*high fives* I'm glad. :)
That is such a compliment. *hugs*
I really did. :)
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I need to make them feel better and at the same time not to forget their past and their mistakes, learn from them and do better this time. Make it this time. :)
I needed to include some Cullen time and thought that would be the way to do it. LOL :) And I just saw Bells and Em rebelling.
Jasper loves Amber like his own daughter. :)
I will include more of their pasts in the coming chapter, you'll see. And about Amber and her dad too.
Cynthia will be more in the story too. They will help her and make it better, somehow. :) Cause frankly, their parents really suck.
Thank you so much, sweetie. And no worries, i love two parted reviews. Makes me all giddy and happy. ;)
Love you!
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Yep, I so agree on this Mon and you wrote/do this always perfectly. :)
*lol* to Bells and Em. :) And I really loved the Cullen time. You did a awesome way to include them. :)
Oh, yeah he does and that is always so sweet to read. *melt*
Oh that's good to know. :D *excited* + about Amber and her dad, too? *ui now I'm superexcited* *Brain thinks: Hm, means this the trouble???* ;) Of course you don't have to answer that.
Oh yeah, their parents suck and I think it is a wonderful idea, that they will help her and of course that Cynthia and Alice form a bond again. :)
Good to know again about parted reviews and you are always very welcome honey. LoveU2 :)
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Thank you so so much.
Again, thank you.
Can't tell, won't tell, although I really want to. But I want it to be a surprise how this will all play out. :)
I completely agree with you.
I really do. :)
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