Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 19

Sep 08, 2009 21:51

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 19
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.


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realynn8 September 10 2009, 08:29:02 UTC
You're so going to kill me the next chapter.

BUT I do have a plan to bring Carlisle more into the story, just for you!

Thank you, sweetie, I'm so happy you liked it.

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realynn8 September 11 2009, 07:45:29 UTC
*nervous* You'll see. *hides back under the table*

Aww, love you to the Sun and back too!

Nah, random. I just used the names I liked and thought fit. :)

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andre07hsm September 14 2009, 08:17:32 UTC
love this chapter....
alice and ella was so sweet....
thanks for sharing.are the 4 am but I couldn´t go to sleep without reading this chapter (:

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realynn8 September 14 2009, 17:38:49 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Aww, that is awfully nice to hear. LOL You are adorable.

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frust_sheep November 8 2009, 19:09:02 UTC
PART 1 ( ... )

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realynn8 November 9 2009, 12:07:12 UTC
Hey hun ( ... )

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frust_sheep December 8 2009, 19:39:33 UTC
Oh sweetie brilliance live in a other universe, sadly not mine. ;) You are very welcome. I love you, too!

Yep, the song was awesome for this chapter. :)

Yep, they have different relationships with each other and you showed this wonderful here. :D Yep, Emmett is just Emmett and that's why we love him. ;D

Oh thanks sweetie and thanks to Alice! ;)

Yeah, I really love your taste and Bella otherwise is often a character, who is the last on my fav list. *Oops* ;)

Yup, he is ;), but he is also very understandable...so good closure. :)

Yep, I agree with your opinion about Rose and Alice and of course with Jasper. I love that, too. :D

Yep, I really understand your need to include this. I think this was perfect and the right choice to make this step before the daddy issue... :)
I so agree here with your opinion again!

Your wishes are my wishes sweetie in the A&J universe. ;)

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realynn8 December 10 2009, 09:30:10 UTC
From where I am sitting, you are pretty brilliant. I wouldn't trade you for anything or anyone. :D

We love Emmett, I have always disliked people who wrote him as stupid or didn't like him. Idiots.

You are very welcome. :D

Yeah, same here. I'm not that much into Bella. Too much whining and complaining. And idealizing.

*high fives*

Thank you, I'm glad you agree.

That is awesome. :D

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frust_sheep November 8 2009, 19:10:13 UTC
PART 2 ( ... )

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realynn8 November 9 2009, 12:18:39 UTC
Squee, part 2 ( ... )

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frust_sheep December 8 2009, 19:59:52 UTC
That is so cool, so we can see it always like a movie. :) And of course they were all so adorable in their own way. :)

You always made a perfect job in writing them in character. :)

Oh yep, the aunty and the comfy big bear adorable and unique in their own way. :D
I would cuddle with Em, too. ;)

That is always wonderful and so good and really easier to imagine it. Yep, I so agree again.

Yep, Rose is smart and wants the best for her brother and her friends. :)

Oh yep, *cough* who don't want to be the baby here. *LOL* ;) *cough*

Oh yes, they really are and I so understand that you could not do it. :)

Oh yeah *high five*, *high five*. ;)

I so agree again and if the girl has not a special spot for him, she is blind, deaf and has no great taste. *LOL* ;)

That is a realistic side again of Rose and about the whole situation. I so agree!

YOU ARE ALWAYS VERY WELCOME SWEETIE!!!

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realynn8 December 10 2009, 09:18:33 UTC
LOL I just adore you. :D

Thank you so much, sweetie. Characterization is very important to me and I am very happy you liked it and think it's suitable. Look what kind of a review I got at ff, *giggles*:

Based on the true characters, this does not fly. Jasper would never drink,
especially alcohol. And Alice loves him too much to stay away for 5-years, and
would always know where he is with her vision.

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