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realynn8

The Road To Redemption (Twilight one-shot)

Nov 15, 2009 20:22

Title: THE ROAD TO REDEMPTION (one-shot)
Characters/Pairings: Carlisle/Jasper
Rating: PG-13 / T
Category: Family/General

Tagline: Sometimes the only obstacle between you and your future is yourself.

Summary: Alice and Jasper join their new family, and even though Alice jumps right into it, Jasper slowly fits in as well. But not everything is ( Read more... )

carlisle, jasper, fanfiction

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frust_sheep November 15 2009, 23:13:13 UTC

*Awww* what a awesome one-shot. :) It was so great to read it through Carlisle POV and especially to see how they bonded / to see how their relation could be / would be formed. I loved the part, where Jasper let slip some of his emotions and Carlisle was shocked and thought "Some of it?" I think this was brilliant, so that Carlisle really felt Jaspers pain and has a notion, in which massive pain Jasper is all the time. Of course also the part, where Carlisle could feel the love, which Jasper has for his Alice.

And this was brilliant too and so true in Jasper's case. “When you forgive yourself” *sniffle* Also Carlisle whole comment with "We are only human after all.” This was also very awesome written.

Anyway I love how you wrote this one-shot and how you outlined this story. This was really so in character again. :)

realynn8 November 16 2009, 08:47:21 UTC

Aww, thank you so much, sweetie. I figured I needed to give you a little something, since the next chapter of SGSC isn't up yet.

I am so happy you liked it, you know I've never before written anything like this, not any story in the original Twilight universe at all. I had to try. :)

And I am so so glad you liked it. *squee*

And also that you thought they were in character, that means the world. Thank you so much, sunshine!!!

frust_sheep November 16 2009, 20:26:49 UTC

You are very welcome sweetie. :)

You did really a awesome job again and this time in the original Twilight universe. :)

realynn8 November 17 2009, 09:33:07 UTC

Aww, thank you. :) I am so happy you think so. :):):)

marsuk November 15 2009, 23:16:43 UTC

Aww that was really well written and I really liked ur Carlisle he was to the T. Aww it did make me shed a tear ~Beautiful

realynn8 November 16 2009, 08:44:36 UTC

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me that you liked it. :) Awesome, thank you!

applecandy22 November 16 2009, 01:12:41 UTC

very sweet!

realynn8 November 16 2009, 08:44:14 UTC

Thank you! :)

dbn_broberg November 16 2009, 16:13:15 UTC

This was beautiful - absolutely beautiful!

I love the bonding between Jasper and Carlisle. The way Carlisle just lets Jasper know he´s there to listen if Jasper needs it.

There´s too few Carlisle/Jasper stories like this - where you see Jasper accepting Carlisle as the father of the family.

Lovely!

realynn8 November 16 2009, 17:05:44 UTC

Aww, thank you so much. Such a lovely comment, really means a lot to me. :)

I love stories like this, too, and therefore decided to write one myself. I am so happy you like it. :)

Thanks!

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realynn8 November 20 2009, 22:09:01 UTC

Aww, thank you so much, sweetie. :) That means a lot to me.

And I hope you're not mad for not sending it to you for betaing it, I know you had a lot on your plate and this was very short notice, so I didn't want to burden you. *hugs*

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realynn8 November 29 2009, 12:31:51 UTC

Thank you so much for understanding, sweetie. *hugs*

I don't mind at all that you take some time with the chapters, that is completely fine with me, never worry about that. This one just came up super fast and I had a deadline and didn't want to bother you.

But you are definitely still my no1 beta. Promise. *glomps*

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