The Secret Garden

Dec 29, 2009 11:47

Title: THE SECRET GARDEN
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating:
PG13 / T
Category: AU / AH
Genre: Friendship/Adventure
Summary: A beautiful place, perfect for hiding from the big bad world, the secret garden is a sanctuary for young Alice and her new friend.

Disclaimer: Characters belong to Stephenie Meyer.
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jasper, fanfiction, alice

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realynn8 December 29 2009, 18:25:23 UTC
Really? Wow, that is such a nice compliment. Thank you so much. *glomps*

I just wrote the whole thing 'by ear', didn't really plan it out. I'm glad you like the outcome.

Kiss

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martinibaby1 December 29 2009, 18:37:49 UTC
And I had fun reading it! Really. This was my first Alice/Jasper fic, and the first kid-fic I ever read and I liked it. You have a good and easy way of telling a story and you captured their world and fear perfectly. Thank YOU for sharing this with us and remind me about voting okay, so I can give you my vote!

*kiss*

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realynn8 December 29 2009, 19:24:31 UTC
You did? Oh, that makes me so happy! *glomps*

I usually plan the fic out a bit and decide what I want to write and where I want to go first, but with this one I just kind of wrote it 'by ear'. And I am glad you liked it, that means so much to me. I've never written a kid fic before.

Thank you.

I will. *giggles*

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martinibaby1 December 30 2009, 12:42:34 UTC
For me it depends, sometimes I do have it mapped out in my head and sometimes I don't.

A question: I wrote the first chapter of a Bella/Edward fic and I was wondering, if you wanted to read it through, to see if there are certain things unclear and if it captures your interest a little. I'm also looking for a rock-song to fit with the first chapter so I can use the lyrics of that song to open the chapter and maybe change the title of the chapter... feel free to ignore my request though. I'm going to take a nap now! ciao x

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realynn8 December 30 2009, 13:01:48 UTC
Sure thing. :) Just send it over, I'd be honoured. Although I have to tell you that I am probably going to look at it tomorrow, cause I have a birthday party to attend to. ;)

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applecandy22 December 30 2009, 04:43:48 UTC
this was so cute! jasper being so sweet with Alice. The garden is a great idea....I hope u win this challenge
and waiting for you to update your "sometimes goodbye is a second chance.." cant wait

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realynn8 December 30 2009, 10:50:11 UTC
Thank you so much, I am really happy you liked it.

SGSC will be updated today. :D

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kem722 December 30 2009, 05:12:44 UTC
Aww! This is so cute:) Loved it--I hope if I ever have a son he's as sweet and charming at Jasper!!

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realynn8 December 30 2009, 10:50:38 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm really happy you like it. :)

And yes, me too. :D

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realynn8 January 10 2010, 11:09:54 UTC
Aww, thank you, darling. :)

I wrote it in an evening, submitted it the next morning and didn't plan it out at all. It all went so fast.

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realynn8 January 30 2010, 13:04:42 UTC
Awwwww! *glomps*

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