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realynn8

Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 24

Jan 17, 2010 14:07

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 24
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

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jasper, fanfiction, alice

Comments 11

matildos January 17 2010, 19:18:47 UTC

GREAT! love it! and I'd like to read about the night at the party! )))

realynn8 January 20 2010, 13:57:49 UTC

Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Will definitely write it then.

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realynn8 January 20 2010, 13:58:27 UTC

Aawww, thank you, lovey.

Will definitely write the party one-shot. :D

And naked Jacob in the last chapter, just for you.

applecandy22 January 18 2010, 04:59:52 UTC

LOVED IT!
leave the food to bella huh! lolololol
u r such an amazing writer!
thank u for the update!

realynn8 January 20 2010, 13:58:49 UTC

THANK YOU! :)

*blushes*

You're welcome.

lys_chan_83 January 18 2010, 11:10:28 UTC

Lovely, as always.

All the wedding stuff was great, but I love th way they found the rings. (Ali, her engagement ring, and Jazz their wedding rings)

I liked the scene with her "parents". I'm not fond of people who think that because is your child you can bully them and abuse them, ignore them or blame them for everything, and expect total love and respect in return. It's a two ways path. you have to earn that respect, and these two, certainly haven't.

I feel kinda sorry for Cynthia. I hope she can be as strong as Alice soon.

They meet each other in a party? I would love to read about it...

Isn't Jasper the awesomest guy around or what? He stayed awake all night just to watch over Alice's dreams. So sweet.

Love it dear, I'm so waiting for the next chapter.

realynn8 January 20 2010, 14:00:41 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

I'm glad you liked that part. I played around with it for a while.

Me neither. Alice's parents are just stupid. Plain idiots.

I think she'll manage. :)

They didn't meet at a party, I'm so sorry I was unclear. I meant the party where Alice got pregnant. :) Sorry.

Jasper simply rocks. :D

Thanks.

kem722 January 19 2010, 02:14:57 UTC

I love the wedding planning and I really love protective Jasper:) Great chapter, I'll be sad when this story ends!

realynn8 January 20 2010, 13:59:12 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm really happy you liked it. :)