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OOC: Crit Post
Please tell me if I am doing it wrong and how so, so that I don't fail to meet expectations.
Thank you.
Anon will be turned on but telling me face to face would be highly appreciated.
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He was really attached [audio]
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Wow, your coat's all messed up. I thought it was tougher than that.
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Elpizo?
...my coat
How is that even possible...it shouldn't be.
Are you OK? I mean we can just get you another co-
How does a bush even tear that?
ITSHOULDN'TBEINANYWAYSHAPEORFORMPOSSIBLE.ITISFARMOREDURABLETHANFORJUSTSOMEPIECEOFVEGETATIONTO-[and he goes off to rant ( Read more... ) -
[All Patamon post, yaaaay]
I keep seeing people talk about it, I'm kinda' wondering about it.
And Elpizo doesn't want to tell me, something about "pointless, don't bother with" yadda yadda, negative remark here.
SO- what's White Day -
Post-Invasion
I'd rather not have to deal with something like that again.
But you did so well!
I didn't, you're simply too oblivious to notice the actual danger.
...you think I'm dumb...
What? I never said that Patam- WHERE ARE YOU GOING!? [sound of little wings flapping as Patamon flees]
Great....She never got upset when I actually meant to say things like -
Patamon truly is blonde [Voice]
OMG ELPIZO! LOOK AT ME! AREN'T I AWESOME!?
...I-uh...you're...D-did you digivolve? What is this appearance?
Nooooo, silly, why would I digivolve! ...I don't know why I'm like this either but it's awesom- hfadjgfs HEY why are you dropping your coat on me!?
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[Voice]
Patamon where's my D-comm.
I dunno'.
Patamon.
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...You have it don't you.
No?
Give it back.
I dun want to! I was going to talk to people!
[le sigh] Patamon, don't be difficult here.
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[Text- Locked from Hostiles and MMZ cast]
I really should have done this a while ago. Guess my sense have just been escaping me while I explored though.
My name is Elpizo, and I've been wandering around for quite a while now.
If it's not too much to ask of, I don't suppose there's a place I could take a brief residence in? -
[Audio] The Second Strike
Come on, think about it rationally.
Think about what how now?
Your partner- you think he's gay? What with the pink and all?
Gay? He's way too grumpy all the time to be happy.
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...How are you so dumb yet know what that is SUPPOSED to mean?
Know what, what means?
GAY!
I told you he's not really happy! You guys are dumb, seriously.
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[Audio] Well that's an awkward intro
DUUUUUUDE- what is with the PINK man!? You know no chicks are going to dig you when you're clashing like that. OH WAIT- maybe you're trying to be macho, show how much unafraid of chick colors you are!
...Not exactly the first thing I'd like to meet after my first few minutes here.
Can I eat it?It'll probably make you sick, so I'd refrain from it ( Read more... )