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when two worlds collide chapter 6

Jul 24, 2011 22:22

Summary:
Popular. Jock. Outspoken. Handsome. Straight.
These are all words you would use to describe Luke Snyder
Luke's just your normal average teenager. An excellent basketball player he's on track for a full ride scholarship. His parents Lily and Damian Grimaldi couldn't be prouder and Luke's never been more popular with the kids at school. Luke ( Read more... )

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jeri_1116 July 27 2011, 04:18:23 UTC

I like that Holden is there and that Casey and Maddie make an appearance, you even threw in Ali. Love the end where Noah drifts off -but he needs to tell Luke he loves him also, very sweet.

seajellybaby July 27 2011, 09:31:01 UTC

AWE!! Noah heard Luke say he loved him! Such a sweet ending to this chapter with Holden being there for both the boys like that...

wheelie47 July 27 2011, 19:43:02 UTC

Such a sweet and tender scene in the hospital. Loved that Noah heard Luke's 'I love you' and that he said it back to him.
Great chapter!

dirklover23 July 27 2011, 20:03:03 UTC

I love that Holden was a part of when Noah woke up.

And how cute Noah heard Luke saying he loves him :)

random_nic July 30 2011, 13:31:10 UTC

I hate that it took such a horrible act of violence for Luke to admit what's truly important - not hiding yourself to please others, but living an honest life. Great chapter!