Ends (Star Wars: Anakin/Obi-Wan)

Nov 26, 2005 11:54

Title: Hard To Say Goodbye
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi
Prompt: Ends
Word Count: 1313
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If they were mine, Anakin/Obi-Wan would be canon. And graphic.
Author's Notes: Beta by Microsoft Word

Ends )

fanfic100, ani/obi

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lightningsqueen December 18 2005, 11:52:40 UTC
Aww...

Made me want to cry. Especially considering that Anakin/Obi-Wan is my OTP when it comes to Star Wars. This is amazing hun!

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rebelsaint January 24 2006, 03:24:08 UTC
I suck at replying, I'm sorry. *hangs head* But thank you for the lovely words. :)

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lightningsqueen January 24 2006, 03:26:30 UTC
Naw. It's alright. And you're very welcome.

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lovedancelady January 23 2006, 21:31:15 UTC
Such a sad yet still beautiful ending. That is why I love angst when it's done properly and here it was. Good job!

Also... The sex... Obi against wall? like oooooooooooooooooowwwh. :D hottt.

One thing though: Anakin swearing in huttese? Are you sure?!? No offense, but it was a bit surprising... (or maybe I am the ignorant one ;))

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rebelsaint January 24 2006, 03:21:53 UTC
Well, he spoke Huttese in Episode I, and I figured if anyone knew how to swear well, it would be Anakin. Or am I missing something?

Glad you liked the ending, though. I'm always crap at writing endings to stories; I feel like they're too mushy or cliched, or something. Angst comes so easily with these two, when sometimes all I wanna write is fluff!

*marks a gold star on her hotness chart* Yay, that's one for me. XD

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