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Too Much (Star Wars: Anakin/Obi-Wan)

Jan 22, 2006 22:42

Title: Too Much
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi
Prompt: Too Much
Word Count: 1116
Rating: R
Disclaimer: If they were mine, Anakin/Obi-Wan would be canon. And graphic.
Author's Notes: Beta by Microsoft Word

( Too Much )

fanfic100, ani/obi

Comments 10

ryuniel January 23 2006, 15:10:50 UTC

*breathless* Beautiful fic. So Anakin found his sleeping pill, now it's Obi-Wan's turn.

I really like your disclaimer. *giggle*
Would you consider writing a series? I'm looking for a long fic of something like this.

rebelsaint January 24 2006, 02:58:26 UTC

Thank you! :)

And you mean like a continuation of this? It might fit into the rest of my 100 somewhere. Several of them will probably link up, but by no means will all 100 be in the same universe. If that makes sense. When I'm done, I'll probably note which ones can be read as a series.

elthegeneral January 23 2006, 18:37:11 UTC

I'm loving these! thank you for linking us to your fics. Mmmmmm!! Keep up the good work!!!!!

rebelsaint January 24 2006, 02:59:09 UTC

Hee, thanks. :)

lovedancelady January 23 2006, 21:37:01 UTC

Hey girl, Obi/Ani ARE canon!!! .... aren't they??? They just never showed it on screen. I mean the graphic part :D

Love fic. hot and sad, beautifully balanced, nicely written. Yeah, keeps me wanting for more too ;)

rebelsaint January 24 2006, 03:01:32 UTC

Maybe I should say explicitly canon. ;) Cause omgtheyaresoinlove.

And thank you. I went through a couple drafts on this one and wasn't sure I picked the right one.

culuyetille January 24 2006, 00:13:49 UTC

I adore this, it left me breathless. Appropriate doses of thought and action, very much Anakin's turf ^___^ Obi's restraint is legendary, and you've made him sweet and caring. I do hope to read more from you!!

rebelsaint January 24 2006, 03:03:26 UTC

I wasn't sure I had the characterization down right in this one, so I'm glad you approve. Thank you.

gunxshyed January 24 2006, 03:14:03 UTC

I am loving these little fics. They are so nice and wonderful, and just how I like them. Short and poignant. I think the characterization is perfect, warm and yet unsure, which I believe is the nature of their relationship in the beginning. Trying to push away, but physically incapable of it. Obi-Wan was very well done. Poor restless Jedi.

rebelsaint January 24 2006, 03:28:39 UTC

I'm glad you like them short, because if I try to write long ones, I give up on them and they never go anywhere.

And I had such problems with Obi-Wan in this one; he kept wanting to talk, and wouldn't listen when I told him to shut up. I nearly had to gag him. Though Anakin may want to do that... *scribbles plotbunny* Um, but anyway, I'm glad you think he was written well. :)