Smell (Star Wars: Anakin/Obi-Wan)

[rebelsaint]

Title: Afterward
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi
Prompt: Smell
Word Count: 193
Rating: PG-13ish
Disclaimer: If they were mine, Anakin/Obi-Wan would be canon. And graphic.
Author's Notes: Slightly AU. Anakin was not burned beyond recognition on Mustafar, he's still pretty.

Comments

[anakin415]

:: eyebrow raised :: want to read more

[rebelsaint]

I'll take that as a positive review. :) There will be more, as soon as I can coax it out of my poor, battered muse.

[anakin415]

tell the muse i shall take to spankin it lol

[rebelsaint]

Oh, she'll like that. ;)

[ryuniel]

Is that mean if they meet next time, Anakin will punish Obi with longer sex scene? *giggle*

[rebelsaint]

Only time will tell. ;)

[lovedancelady]

whoah yeah. That would be their true nature - I can sooo see Vader raping Obi-Wan... I am twisted, I know...

So please, more! It's a plotline that is worth exploring, and you write it well too :)

[rebelsaint]

Glad you liked. I've seen the same theme done elsewhere, but I had to put my own personal spin on it. That's what happens when you wake up in the middle of the night with a plotbunny. :P

[inylan]

1st reaction: POOR OBI-WAN!

2nd reaction: They were so screwing around before Ani went evil, and this just proved it.

3rd reaction: Obi so wants to meet him again, and next time he'll have the lube.

_Iny_

[rebelsaint]

1. Perhaps.

2. Duh ;)

3. LOL

[despondentdream]

Gah. This is excellent. <3

I've always loved this concept. And hated it. Ahhh, what can I say? You did it superbly. ^^

[rebelsaint]

I think I understand what you mean. It's amazing when done right, but heartbreaking at the same time, yes? Thanks for the compliment!

[despondentdream]

Exactly! And it just hurts when it's done wrong. *shakes head* You're welcome. :D