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[fic] shinee; seconds lost between

Jan 23, 2011 11:55

seconds lost between; jonghyun/minho
570 words. rated pg.

♦ minho thinks about things; mostly about jonghyun
♦ written originally for a 15min challenge, incorporating the words trainwreck, dancing in the rain, & shawty got back. also, for compatable because jongho is otp.

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pairing: jonghyun/minho, group: shinee

Comments 29

tiggie0307 January 25 2011, 05:49:17 UTC

Now this; I can see really happening because I doubt it wouldn't take much for them to get the company ban and some beer lols and WHAT in the world is Onew singing? XD

rebreak January 25 2011, 22:19:55 UTC

lol. they're just boys wanting to have fun (: ♥ onew's ridiculous, idk what he's even doing myself, C':

♥ thank you so much!

shan_ah_non January 25 2011, 14:39:21 UTC

<33333333333

/stuffs hands into pocket to give more hearts

rebreak January 25 2011, 21:56:48 UTC

aw, you are so cute! thank you :3 ♥!

owlbee February 11 2011, 03:42:01 UTC

omg love love love love. just fldj;ldsk jf;kldsjf; as ♥

rebreak February 11 2011, 13:08:23 UTC

adsfjkl;j! thank you, bb! ♥ :'3

spacejunks February 16 2011, 23:32:07 UTC

ack reposting my comment here!!

I remember being amazed that you fit all three prompts into the Jonghyun/Minho. I feel like usually, the three that would be out dancing would be Onew, Key and Jonghyun, but really, all five of them out dancing in rain isn't farfetched. But contemplative Minho and a slightly whiny but eager to be happy, inquisitive Jonghyun is so... believable, to me.

Your changes make it feel different, but I still like it all the same :))

rebreak February 16 2011, 23:46:49 UTC

!! ♥ even better the second time around ;)

minho is just so. i love how he can sit there and thinkthinkthink quietly all the time, and then at other times he's loud and determined and strong and. i want to drink him in or open his skull to see how his brain works - alas, though, he is not water and i am not a brain surgeon. ):

and jonghyun. your comment just says it all, really. ♥ i'm really happy that you feel it's different but enjoyable anyway! i like to try and write them how i see them, and if you like it, then i must be doing something right.

wow, my comment's long. ok ;; ♥ thank you thank you thank you again!

kotahcola May 14 2011, 08:26:03 UTC

I'm not quite sure how you managed to put all of those weird words together, but I think you did so brilliantly. I'm also not quite sure when you started writing so well (I mean, must you do everything so well). I'm also not quite sure why I am writing this comment at all, seeing as how you know what I think of this story...but here I go anyway...

There is nothing in this world better than a drunken SHINee member. Unless you make it three...keke.
He sings softly, voice low enough that it blends in with the radio, and Minho knows without even turning around that Jonghyun is smiling. As if he were content with this night alone. This is beautiful!!!
I could sit here and quote from this all day, but you already know what you wrote. Instead, I will tell you that the whole conversation between JongHo is fantastic and realistic enough for me to fan-girl over. This is the Jonghyun I fell in love with, and this is the Minho I want him to have...

I may not say this often, but I'm proud of you! ^_^

rebreak May 25 2011, 21:24:32 UTC

i dunno how i put them together either. probably after midnight and hyped up on soda C: i still don't write well ;___; one day i will be half as good as you!!! but i love to know and hear what you think a second time around! it makes it more real, i think. yes.

the summary should have been shinee gets drunk. there are no consequences to their lack of inhibitions. yes. but then the story wouldn't have been the same. sighs. I LOVE JONGHO! IS IT OBVIOUS?

i don't think i write jonghyun very well, or minho for that matter. boys are complicatedly simple. ): but i try!

thank you ♥ i'm really happy just knowing you are.

kotahcola May 26 2011, 05:50:52 UTC

I think that the story is beautiful! FACT!
I love it! So very much! More than I love Snickers or elephants...it's right under Ha Minwoo and four inches from Xiah on my love meter!

I think you do a marvelous job writing both boys. Well boys in general. Don't deny this. It isn't r squared pi.

I still think we should swap journals for an entry and see if anyone notices. I just want to see what they would think and say. It could be quite comical.
Better yet, we should finish Falling Love Spaceship!! Just a suggestion!