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rebreak

[fic] shinee; let them eat cake

Nov 06, 2011 11:39

let them eat cake; gen, slight jonghyun/onew, mentioned jonghyun/kyuhyun
1556 words. rated g.

♦ shinee ventures into the cake building process; jinki has many regrets.
♦ for subtleslide’s replay4japan bid. sorry this is so late.

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pairing: jonghyun/kyuhyun, pairing: jonghyun/onew, group: super junior, !replay4japan, group: shinee, !promises kept

Comments 10

sansunparapluie November 6 2011, 20:36:03 UTC

LOL omg this is adorable! ♥
I have a smile on my face. x)
But cake building -- "build" is an interesting choice of verb?

rebreak November 6 2011, 21:11:58 UTC

aw, thank you! ♥ it's hard stepping back into shinee ;w; i'm glad you liked it!

as for the word "building". well, you can actually build a cake! shinee attempted baking/making a cake, but for them-and all their disastrous kitchen experiences-baking a cake would be a lot like building one. idk. lol. :')

sansunparapluie November 7 2011, 06:06:46 UTC

Ah, I see I see, lol. I was like: Cake building! That's kinda different. There must be some kind of story/reason here that I'm missing... xD;

Secretly-fail Minho, Taemin the sacrifice, evil Kyu cameo -- what's there not to like? :9

rebreak November 8 2011, 20:41:54 UTC

haha! it's okay! :D

this is the product of too much medicine and little sleep, ngl ;w; thank you again! ♥

jinkibumiminho November 7 2011, 00:57:30 UTC

This was fun. I liked snarky Kyuhyun's cameo. Poor Jino!

rebreak November 8 2011, 20:44:38 UTC

thank you! i'm glad! i might or might have a love for kyuhyun-jino too, but the poor boy is so easy to tease! ♥

nautisch November 8 2011, 13:24:32 UTC

is this a 2hyun fic with friendly!jongyu that involves pranking jino. is this real life. did I really just get to read a fic this beautiful. I can't believe it. WHY IS THIS SO PERFECT. and why are you thanking me, I didn't even do anything to bring about this perfection ;____;

they all feel like themselves in this, in a really nicely subdued way.

Jonghyun releases his handful of popcorn. “Wow, never knew popcorn had that effect on someone. We should stop buying this brand.” PERFECT COMIC TIMING JJONG

and words cannot express how much I love the last two scenes. jonghyun trying to use his ~lady killer powers to look cool in front of kyu, kyu being evil and jonghyun having just enough of a mancrush to go along with it--this is so perfect :(

rebreak November 8 2011, 20:46:31 UTC

this is the reality you wanted, katie! ♥ lol. pssh, it's far from beautiful, but thank you!!! you talked to me on twitter; we were each other's support with the whole "need to write h-j/r4j fics sobbing forever"

you were there. it was enough for me. thank you ;w; wibbles.

I LOVE JONGHYUN AND I AM SO GLAD YOU SHARE THIS APPRECIATION OF HIM WITH ME!

thank you. sobs. nothing is as perfect as you and sonali's smtb fics ;_; ♥

subtleslide December 29 2011, 05:35:41 UTC

Ahhhh I'm so late! I've been out of fandom for a few months due to rl and haven't even thought to check my lj :( I'm sorry to have missed this for so long!

I feel like you've read my mind with the prompt because uhhh I was the person shamlessly begging for that Jonghyun-building-Kyuhyun-a-Sandra-Lee-nobakelovecake on the meme (herp derp) and I still can't get over how perfect this is. Seriously. That you've even included all of SHINee into this to help, and the fact that it was three months before the actual birthday...I think that speaks volumes their closeness, which I love in group fics. It really warms my heart ok? ;__ ( ... )

rebreak October 28 2012, 04:59:43 UTC

I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS IS ALMOST A YEAR LATE AND THAT I NEVER RECEIVED THIS COMMENT??? DDD: i am so sorry that i never replied :((( omg i'm so glad i checked :((( forgive me for taking so long with the fic and with this reply ( ... )