Abide by the orders 2/2

[red_prince22]

Title: Abide by the orders
Pairing : Jongkey
Rating : R
Genre : AU
Description : Jonghyun was finally appointed by the queen's court to guard a part of the castle. Little did he know, a certain young heir has wandered into the premises.
Author Notes: Omfg okay this is my first time writing for a prompt and I'm so shy >.< Prompt here okay... sorry

Comments

[just2wings]

Omg the end xDDDD
This was really funny but sexy as well, Key you little devious being xD but I liked it hehe
This might be weird to say, but I like how your writing stayed consistent the whole way through. And you did an amazing job with that prompt!

<3

[red_prince22]

Thank you for commenting!! (I've been waiting for one for days!!)

Omfg I'm really happy about your comment because you actually said I was consistent, because I thought I haven't been writing consistent one in a while (AFF) because of school, and this was made at a short time so I had the idea stuck in my head more XD

And hehe I love sexy and funny,it's the best stuff to read and write >w<

Thank you again for liking this and commenting, it means a lot since I just started using my account here and that I've read your fics as well >w

[shineeshipper08]

Omgomgomg I love this especially the little fluffy ending XD. Agh some parts of his was so well written though, like I saw some metaphors and similes that were just absolute perfection and ugghhhhhh. This was written well and I loved it :D. Also what u said about hiding on AFF LOL OMG don't I know it XD. But you fit so well of LJ your writing is amazinggg. Not saying that AFF is had or anything there are still some really good writers there as well. But LJ kinda just....yeah >_<.
Anyways I love this ok, the prompt and the writing everything *^*

D'awwww I read this when I woke up~

[red_prince22]

XDD omg thank you for this comment I'm crying ;w;;;;

I'm really glad that you said I have good writing skills because I'm not always confident with mine.... And that you said I have got similes and metaphors -- >/////< I didn't notice but omg thank you so much!

If you want, you can skim through my AFF stuff and see my posts there.... Hmmm... I wonder if I should put some of them here.... But GAH IDK how to use LJ ><

Anyway, thank you again for commenting and liking the story <3 I love comments here too >w

[shineeshipper08]

I would have quoted some similes/metaphors but I was on mobile and...too lazy LOL
annnnd you should link me to your AFF so I can skim! Because otherwise I have no idea who you are ._.
also LJ is very fancy yes, but you seem to be way better than me considering my LJ is like...barfy and empty and ughhh.
And no problem c: hehe who wouldn't ? :D

[red_prince22]

Lol I was just guessing my way trough the website because I do that a lot, but I find AFF easier because I've been there for like a year XD but lol - just search my user name and then add asianfanfics after it XDD I use the same username for this and my twitter lol

Also I would have loved quotes XDD because being quoted was my long time wish as a writer and only a couple of people ever quoted me in AFF, but it's alright XDD you don't have to if you aren't in the position to >w< you commenting is good enough for me because I love comments XDD

[shineeshipper08]

heh who doesn't like comments? XD
also I would have quoted...I really would have....
going to go look for your AFF now! hehe c:

[red_prince22]

Hehe XD

Great! I'd like to hear from you soon XD <3

Thank you again for being so nice and responsive ;w;

[shineeshipper08]

hehe no problem and I found yeews :D
omg Day by Day looks so sweet I can't wait to read it
sometime
idk when
but I hope it's soon ;-;

[red_prince22]

Itsnalright XD I'm not pressuring you XD you should read when you have ample time too >w<

But since you keep exciting it me, you quote mwahahahahahaa just kidding lol

But yeah, you found me <3333

[kimleesica]

I AM FUCKING SCHREECHGINF AND WHEEZING SO LOUD YOU DONT EVEN KNOW
ITS EVERYTHING I WANTED I SWEAR TO GOD I WAS BITING MY LIPS THE WHOLE TIME AND I WAS SHIFTING SO MUCH BC I WAS SO HOT AND BOTHERED LET ME TELL YOU.

KIBUM BEING A LITTLE NEEDY FUCKER IM SCREAM THAT WAS SO HOT AND ALL THE FUCKING DIRTY TALK HOLY FUCK LET ME JUST FALL FACE TO THE GROUND AND ALL THE DRY HUMPING OHMF YGU IM CYRING BLOOD IT WAS PERFECT AND THE ENDING OMG THAT WAS THE CUTEST ENDING EVER GOODBYE WORLD IM DONE

""I-- Lord-- I can't take it anymore--"

Kibum lifts his silk night gown, from his moonlit thigh to his waist, reveal no undergarment whatsoever and a throbbing member - practically leaking pre-cum."

MY KNEES........THEY WEAKEN SO MUCH FROM THIS SIGHT

FUCK BLESS U I LOVE U I WANT TO KISS YOU AND MAKE OUT WITH U BC THIS IS EVERYHTING I WANTED THANK YOU THANK YOU

Asdgjhddb

[red_prince22]

Omg yay a quote <33 but omg you found that typo I was trying to find all week but i forgot >///////< /hides

BUT YOUR WORDS ARE SO BEAUTIFUL AND PLEASING IT MAKES ME MELT INTO A GOO OF APPRECIATION <3

and I'm happy you made that prompt XDDDD it was so awesome I just had to make it XDDD

Omo if you make out with me (with my little experience) you might regret it >///<

THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT THOUGH, IM CRY BECAUSE I LOVE COMMENTS LIKE THAT XDDD