Pirates fic: A Bird on the Wind

[redbells]

Characters: Jack Sparrow
Rating: G
Length: 100 words
Prompt: blackpearlsails "History"
Notes: For pearlseed :)

Comments

[ext_1466174]

Beautiful summation! Beckett may have left his mark on Jack, but he never broke him.

In fact, it was the other way around... >:)

[aletheiafelinea]

The truth is writ in his skin, yes, but in ink rather than scar - the bird in flight, flying free above the brand, soaring over an endless sea.
This sentence is great, the true Jack.

[beautyfrompain]

I've missed these! Love it. <3

[pearlseed]

Always with Jack there is more and always he sets the course by his plotting.

I truly loved this, sounds like the pirate I fell so smooth in love with.
You got a tasty bittersweet bite showing here, a neat little package of Jack.

Good work here means like Jack, his story.

[ravinthemad]

Love it! Especially the line about the compass spinning and Jack marking his course for freedom. So very Jack!