This was amazing. I only half grasped any of the science concepts, but I'm as impressed with your explanations as I am with the plot line. This was great, and I love how every breakthrough with the hyper system came together as part of the puzzle for how Jaebum was going to try to save Jinyoung. The use of repetition here was really nice too; it was a good echo to reinforce and not bothersome like it is with some authors
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I am at a loss for words, this entire story was just amazing. The entire plot was so engaging, despite myself not fully understanding all the scientific terms. I do have a question about the plot though.
So when Jinyoung passed away, Jaebum had a machine in his own head? I'm not exactly sure how he did it but I'm guessing that with his own mind he transferred Jinyoung's subconsciousness into the Universe/higher dimensions?
Are you considering to add an alternate/extended ending to this story? I surely hope so~ Again, this was truly a treat to read, and I'm certainly looking forward to your future works! (jjp is my primary otp but the little bits of markjin was really cute here too)
that was amazing. barely understood the science stuff, felt like i was reading interstellar, the got7 fanfic ver. thank you very much for such a great read. thank you. 😊😊😊
That was seriously written so well. Like the research behind it too. Ive been to dublin before and you described it perfectly. And im also learning about wernicke korsakoff syndrome now and wow. Its heartbreaking how u described it. Theres a hopeful note to this ending, and i absolutely loved how you wrote everything. This is a masterpiece
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Jaebum will always find Jinyoung and bring him home. Yes.
I hope he shares the info at some point
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So when Jinyoung passed away, Jaebum had a machine in his own head? I'm not exactly sure how he did it but I'm guessing that with his own mind he transferred Jinyoung's subconsciousness into the Universe/higher dimensions?
Are you considering to add an alternate/extended ending to this story? I surely hope so~
Again, this was truly a treat to read, and I'm certainly looking forward to your future works! (jjp is my primary otp but the little bits of markjin was really cute here too)
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