[fic] Ivory Heart

[reddenish]

Title : Ivory Heart

Author : reddenish

Cast : Kim Jaejoong, Jung Yunho (as a main character), Kim yun yi (jaejoong's sister), Shin yoo jin (will come up latter)

Pairings : yunjae, yunxyi, jaexjin

Genre : angst, romance, drama

Rate : still PG-13 for now, but some NC-17 for latter

Warning : character death, strong languange, and bad grammar (of course *ger bricked

Comments

[zanzenita]

wow...am I the first reading this?
hehehe...lucky...
damn...yunho really do it hard...
tsk...tsk..tsk...
aishh....poor jaejoong...must be hard for him to walk after that...
but...but...the smex really HOT...*blush*

[reddenish]

hehehe... thank you, i'm glad you like it ^^

hhmm... yunho do jae hard, yes. but jae like it ....

hahaha

[yna91]

the only thing that i cn say now is...
WOW!!!
GOSH THAT IS FREAKIN HOT U NOE???
*winks*
*giggles*
gotta run b4 yunjae knew i love their smex ^^
good job dear

[reddenish]

hihihi *gigles*

thank you, i love yunjae hot smex too ^^ *whisper whisper*

run with u~~

[mourningtea]

Tsk... that was stupid. I smelled something fishy at the last chapter but I didn't knew that Jaejoong would acting like this because of desperation and stupidity. He thinks he's a genious but... at this moment he was the one who lost his virginity with angry and unloving partner.

BTW, smut was hot. Thank you. ^^

[reddenish]

hohoho... there is something fishy you know?? jaejoong is desperates and angry, thats why he doing this.

anyway, thanks for reading ^^

[takelo14]

omo T_T i really feel sad for jaejoong
and that yunho doesnt even know his parents are forcing him to be the donor for his sister D:

i think he's acting like this becuz he feels unwanted and bitter. I hope he feels better later in the story <3

UPDATE SOOOOON ^^ <3

[reddenish]

thank you, i will update as soon as i can ^^

[jae000]

Hehe I love manipulative Jae!Just so evil mouhahaha!!!...*cough* That was hot smex XD Your english is fine, just need to work on the verb and a little of that and this but it's still easy to understand.Good job.
Please update soon^^

[reddenish]

aaww... thank you ^^

glad this chapter okay, 'cause i'm still not confodent with my english :)