When There's Nothing Left to Burn (2/?)

Jan 03, 2011 18:38

The night falls and the sun rises, just as Sergio doesn’t expect.  He wakes up at two in the afternoon the next day because he can’t fall asleep until he is completely sure that everyone else in the town is long unconscious.

He stares in the mirror for a while, half expecting that he will be different somehow, but his mother calls him down to ( Read more... )

fic, sernando, when there's nothing left to burn

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notoriousjk January 4 2011, 02:03:57 UTC
just as lovely as the first chapter. I love how plot driven this story is, even as we are introduced to new characters, those new characters are not only interesting, but also seem to drive the plot forward.

Looking forward to more.

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redfuryy January 4 2011, 23:11:10 UTC
Thank you. :D

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kissmecait17 January 4 2011, 02:36:56 UTC
I love how these characters feel so fully-formed even when we first meet them.
Some favorite parts:
I’m a queer, boys!  A raging homosexual.
Sergio feels as though he is being accused. 
(Sergio didn't say very much but I just feel for him.)
  After a few displaced smiles, he drifts into an uneasy sleep and promises to work on the letters in the morning.

He only finishes Sergio’s.

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redfuryy January 4 2011, 23:11:27 UTC
Thank you very much :D

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influira January 4 2011, 02:50:59 UTC
jesus. i just went and read the first chapter and now this one, and just. this is absolutely lovely. i can't even begin to explain just how much i adore this, but i really really really really really really really really do. i CANNOT wait for more, i'm literally sitting at the edge of my seat for a new update. adore, adore, adore the characterizations and basically all of it. quite exciting!

very much looking forward for more.

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redfuryy January 4 2011, 23:11:51 UTC
Ah, this really means a lot to me! I'm glad you like it so much.

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aboutademongirl January 4 2011, 03:39:55 UTC
Sniffle.

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redfuryy January 4 2011, 23:12:24 UTC
Better stock up on tissues... that's all I've got to say.

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cherebeaux January 4 2011, 15:35:32 UTC
One hundred and ten perfect homosexual!

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redfuryy January 4 2011, 16:26:29 UTC
UGH I AM SORRY. It was supposed to say percent, but I'm an idiot.

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