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cherebeaux January 11 2011, 15:41:30 UTC
This is getting good and I don't even know what to type for as a comment.

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redfuryy January 12 2011, 02:19:52 UTC
I am actually okay with that. :D

Thanks for reading.

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abitof_m0nkeys January 12 2011, 02:04:10 UTC
OH PIQUE. you are so stupid. ahahahah but srsly... this love triangle of iker/cesc/pique (my ot3, actually) is just. i love it, but it has to end up the right way, you know? and by right way i mean fabrique.

poor sese and nando... starcrossed lovers?

aaaargh i need to stop commenting but this is so quality.

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redfuryy January 12 2011, 02:17:05 UTC
Oh, you're SO right. There is absolutely a right way to end this all off, but of course Iker has to get involved...

Haha, oh god. But who is Juliet and who is Romeo? Both are pretty girly...

No, please don't. I love feedback, especially when it's as entertaining as yours!

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abitof_m0nkeys January 12 2011, 03:13:17 UTC
iker/cesc is such a love-hate thing for me, i dunno. like when it's done right, it's on point, but then cesc/pique is just real life. not debatable. the best solution is clearly all three together. ahahah.

ahahahah they are. fer can be juliet for now. cause he's got a prettier face. :P

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redfuryy January 12 2011, 04:11:25 UTC
Honestly, I'm the biggest fan of Fabrique ever. It's absolutely one of my football OTPs. But Iker has a niche to fill.

And YES, Cesc/Pique is real life. Even Iker knows it, if you've read that interview he gave about after the WC!

And Fer is prettier, yes,
for now

*WHISTLES INNOCENTLY*

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kfunk22 January 12 2011, 05:50:19 UTC
this? is really vivid, and really well written.

can't wait for more.

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redfuryy January 12 2011, 05:56:00 UTC
ah, thank you<3

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oxo33 January 12 2011, 15:34:07 UTC
This really got me thinking... Good story, perfect writing! And I love Piqué, so I hope you'll make him a bit more likeable in the future...

Sergio and Nando are perfect, of course.

PS: Yesterday I read that in war, the masculinum singular of widows is hero - that's exactly what your story reminds me of.

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redfuryy January 12 2011, 16:33:21 UTC
Ah, thank you! Yes, Pique's just... I don't think he understands what's going on. I gave him the stereotypical perspective of an unwaveringly and irrationally patriotic American, but he'll definitely grow up a bit.

Ooooh. That is... that's just genius. Thank you for sharing! :D

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akillia555 April 2 2011, 21:11:36 UTC
its wonderful. very touching, i hope you will continue this.

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