working title: Dragons and Maidens (unfinished)

[redheadd_dancer]

Feb 12, 9:45pm: minor changes to grammar and wordingShe was so caught up in her thoughts as she stared out at the darkness, she didn’t hear him approach, nor even notice his hands when they joined hers on the stone railing that ringed the balcony. The lights from inside caught on the glass beads and made them sparkle like tears against the pale

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[mysistermeg]

Wow... That is really, REALLY good!

[mystymind]

damn.
that was incredible, and it said A LOT. A lot which I know was hard for you to write. That is a really really emotional piece and... boy did it move me. Just... wow. That's my kind of fairy tale.

Listen I like this a lot and as I was reading it I could see it, and hear it being played out on stage. If I give you full credit would you mind if I reformat it into a script, I'd like to use it as a scene in theatre maybe for a one act night, and I'd like to use her speech to him as an audition monologue. That is some perfectly amazing and intense stuff.

allegorey follows us everywhere.

[redheadd_dancer]

go for it!
also, its still unedited, and if you have any ideas on minor changes or rewordings let me know cause it'd be really really cool if i could get this one up to publishing quality.

[the_ninja_vs]

"love is a beautiful thing when one is young and believes in its power.”

Love makes the world go round, I think that it's only through the pursuit of love that we can truly discover who we realy are. This is why so many high school and college students believe that they are in "love" but I think that love is something attained with time. just my 2 cents

oh and you should let me see the entire thing cause it looks AWSOME. and if this is the entire thing WRITE MORE!!!!

Hopefuly i'll c you on friday and saterday!
-Michael-