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Sep 12, 2005 16:46

My Room ( Read more... )

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missleigh716 September 12 2005, 22:12:39 UTC

Wow i absolutely love that poem. i never looked at a bedroom that way, lol.

My fave. lines are about the closet & walls =)

Did u write it? it's amazing!

redlightdistric September 13 2005, 01:54:56 UTC

thanks very much! and yes, i did write it myself.

missleigh716 September 13 2005, 10:12:59 UTC

You should post up more of your poems =D lol!

_mitch September 12 2005, 22:37:04 UTC

Agreed with the above.

Interesting persepective, and a good piece.

redlightdistric September 13 2005, 01:55:15 UTC

thanks dude, i wrote it for Writer's Craft

psyphore September 12 2005, 23:30:15 UTC

As both of the above, naturally.

Though could it be a song..? Or possibly a melody, a lullaby of some kind?

redlightdistric September 13 2005, 01:55:50 UTC

thank you. i never thought of putting music to it, but it definitely has a certain ring to it as a lullaby.

psyphore September 13 2005, 02:16:20 UTC

Sing it to your children before they sleep. It'll teach them to be independant, and that they can trust in themselves.

...At least I think so...