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redlucy07

In Black and White

Mar 26, 2010 11:35

Title: In Black and White
Author: redlucy07 (Sophia)
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
Pairing: Renee Walker/Vladimir Laitanan
Warnings: Violence, language, sex, possible non-con. They didn't exactly have a loving relationship.
Summary: Detailing Renee Walker's time undercover with the Russian mob and her violent, turbulent relationship with Vladimir Laitanan. ( Read more... )

in black and white, fic, 24

Comments 6

anonymous March 26 2010, 20:42:11 UTC

Ooh, this is amazing. Very believable! I can definitely see Renee being willing to do whatever it takes to uncover the illegal activities, not thinking that she'd actually have to sleep with him, or that she'd end up getting raped. The Renee you've created brings to mind the confident Renee we saw dealing with Ziya and then dealing with Vlad before he threw her in the trunk of the car.

Can't wait to see where you take this!

redlucy07 March 26 2010, 21:15:54 UTC

Thank you!! I'm having a lot of fun shall we say... extrapolating?
I think she understands she might have to get down and dirty with him, but I don't think she's maybe a little too cocky and confident to really examine the possible consequences. Thanks for reading!

molly1017 March 26 2010, 21:39:36 UTC

Ooohhh, this is so terrific... I can't wait to see where this goes!!! I love the idea that you are brave enough to tackle Renee's time undercover w/ Vladimir b/c I haven't read any other fanfic that attempts that subject. The writing is really concise & believable. I also feel like you are true to the characters. Renee's waffling back and forth between following the rules & not following the rules is one thing I love about her & you're really exploring that here.

By the way, I've got you listed on "author alert" under fanfiction.net b/c I loved The Mirror so much. Was so excited to see you have started something new. :)

Molly.

redlucy07 March 26 2010, 23:41:06 UTC

Thank you for your lovely comment! Yeah, I'm really excited about the premise and the freedom it affords me. It's a bit intimidating! I want to do it justice. Very glad you liked The Mirror, as well.

mulefa March 27 2010, 10:32:26 UTC

Cool - one of the first non-Jack fics I've had any interest in :)

siricerasi March 29 2010, 13:34:58 UTC

Wonderful start! I'm very much in love with your writing style. Can't wait for more =)