The paradox of felt isolation in crowds.

[rednickel]

I've been trying to re-work an old poem of mine:

Christmas Party, Paths to NowhereI remember the winter night I finally lost it

Comments

[afallenautumn]

I enjoyed this one. The last line was my favorite.

interesting

[amberleecarter]

the greatness about this piece is that it's always seemed so isolated, even from you, it's writer. I guess that is the point though huh? you must of been feeling completely cut off from the rest of the hungry world, in order to compose a poem with this much distance seeping from it's soul.
It's beautiful though Travis, you already knew I'd say that. And comepletely true of many people, myself included...

Always,
Amberlee