Truth and Deceit, Chapter Two

[redoren]

Hi. Sorry this took a few days to get finished. I hope you enjoy it. The third chapter is well on its way so expect that soon.

Disclaimer 
It's just a bit of harmless fun, no money making involved here. These characters belong to BSG and the people who make it.

Warnings
Mmm, when it comes to warnings regarding this chapter, I'll say this, it's not

Comments

[maudvandutch]

Woah, great turn of events here!

[redoren]

Thank you :)

I never mean to write an entire chapter with Tory in it, but she always seems to make her way in there and won't leave LOL! She's like a little hidden gem in BSG fic writing. I never particularly loved her character on the show, I was always a Billy fan, but she's such an interesting character really and she's unavoidable when it comes to fic. You just have to include her every now and then :)

[maudvandutch]

She used to be a favorite of mine, even though I loved Billy (who doesn't!?). She just seemed very dedicated but also very loyal, and those are two features that I admire greatly. No idea what the writers are doing to her now, but I can't wait to see what you come up with ;)

[redoren]

Thanks :) I shall endeavour to make the most of her character.

I also admire her loyalty and dedication. I think it was when that ship hit Colonial One and Laura told Bill about Tory's shoulder being dislocated and I thought 'Wow, think about it, she probably did that while shielding the President' and I realised just how loyal Tory could be. Even now that she knows that she's a Cylon, I think she'll remain loyal to Laura Roslin, for whatever reason.

[johnliz4ever]

Woah, Tory. What a girl.

Once, and he got the impression that Laura Roslin was too tired to bother thinking up a decent excuse that day, Tory awkwardly informed him that the President was ‘taking a walk outside’. In the freezing void of space?

Loved that line. It made me laugh.
You're right about 112 BTW. What use would Laura have for it?

Great chapter :)

[redoren]

I'm glad you enjoyed that line :) It was the first thing that popped into my head for this chapter :) I kind of built the whole thing up around it, so I'm glad you liked it :)

As for 112, I have my suspicions, but I can't say anything without revealing the direction I'm taking this fic, so I'll just have to write faster so that I can talk about it :)

Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it.

[laharah]

OH WOW!

just finished these two chapters and you have me hooked. can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter :)

absolutely adore tory's manipulative side. thank you for sharing this with us! =D

[redoren]

Thanks! I am so chuffed when someone enjoys something I've written. There's nothing nicer than getting feedback.

It's like, when I post to Survival Instinct and sometimes I see the read count reach 100 and I think 'YAY! People are reading my fic' then I see the reviews are at two or something and my brain goes 'Oh...two people enjoyed it out of a hundred? YAY! Bring it on! Two people enjoyed my fic!' LOL! And I get so excited because two people have loved it and that's just fantastic! It doesn't matter how many reviews you get, so long as one person enjoys it, it makes my day!

[laharah]

I know exactly what you mean and how you feel! Feedback is the best thing, even if it's just a quick 'enjoyed your story' or something along the lines. It's amazing how it can make you feel ... and it doesn't really matter how many people review as long as someone does =D

That's why I always try to leave a loine or two to let the person know that the effort they put into this reached me and has been appreciated :)

[redoren]

Me too. I try to leave feedback for every fic I read. I can't remember the last time I didn't leave feedback, but I think it was probably when my computer was messing me around and kept cutting off, but I made sure I left feedback later on. It's just such a nice feeling to get feedback :)

[redoren]

I'm working on chapter three right now :) I hope you enjoy it. I can't say I hate Zarek, but that doesn't mean I won't put him through hell LOL! Who knows, you might get your wish. I can't promise anyone will survive this fic :D Just like the show, no character is safe :D

[obsessive_a101]

Hmm... *am intrigued*... I can't wait to see where you go with this, and poor little Tom Zarek. XD... I wonder what the truth of the situation is? Hmm... Tory seems convinced (and has convinced Lee) that he can't be allowed to live (I love how Lee still never noticed himself being manipulated... I mean, he believes Tory and therefore, EO112 was from Zarek, but he doesn't seem to connect that back to the idea of Zarek using him... -_-") LOL! Sorry, I still have an eensy-weensy problem with him at the moment, but poor guy really should be pitied; he's everyone's tool.

Anyway, this was good, and I wonder which side of the truth is the real truth... because obviously, from the first chapter, Laura gave the IMPRESSION of trustin Tom. (^_^)

[redoren]

LOL! I'm glad I have you interested. It's going to get a bit more complicated soon, well, as soon as I can get chapter three finished :)

Thanks for the feedback ::hugs::