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redoren

For egeria61

May 31, 2008 00:48

I've finally got around to posting this. It's a follow up fic to Chamalla and Ambrosia which you can find on Survival Instinct here or my LJ here and you really need to read before reading this one.

This is for egeria61 because if she hadn't asked, I never would have written it.

There may be more to follow this weekend :)

The After Effect
Chapter One

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Comments 16

stiletto_freek May 31 2008, 00:45:45 UTC

LOL...NEEDS MORE...MOOOORE...MOORE.

I LIKED BILL'S INSTINCT TO PROTECT LAURA...THAT WAS SWEET. AND HANGING UP ON TORY...HAHAHAA.

redoren May 31 2008, 21:20:33 UTC

LOL! I think Tory is the sort to waffle on until you shock her or hang up :)

I'm really glad people seem to have liked it and I'm writing more now. :D

mizz_magenta May 31 2008, 02:07:23 UTC

Hehehehe, so much cute! From Bill trying to fend off Tory to the look on Lee and Zarek's faces. And ofc Laura barefoot in Bill's shirt. ;)

redoren May 31 2008, 21:21:35 UTC

::sighs::

Laura barefoot in Bill's shirt would be, let's face it, perhaps one of the best things we could get from BSG now :) It would probably make my brain explode and my heart along with it. ::sighs some more:: I want a cute A/R scene this season! I know things might not end well for anyone in BSG, but dangit, I want some cute A/R before it's all over!

Until then, fics :D

zaleti May 31 2008, 09:45:40 UTC

Oh yaaaay! You wrote more! :D

Poor Bill, dealing with Tory. But omgs, speakerphone! Take that, Quorum! :D
This was great - cracked me the hell up. Exactly what I needed after the day I had at work! Thank you!!
(Oh, and I have to say - more?? SQUEE)

And now back to the driest translation on earth... *cheers weakly*

redoren May 31 2008, 21:17:10 UTC

Thank you :) Glad you liked it, I'm working on more now.

What was up at work today? Just a bad day?

zaleti June 1 2008, 03:17:31 UTC

*rubs hands with glee at prospect*

Work? Just really cranky people. On both sides of the issues desk, LOL :D
(<--- is part-time librarian)
But it all got much better after a nice stiff drink and amusing fic! ;P

redoren June 1 2008, 12:29:14 UTC

I'm glad your day improved :D

I know what it's like when things don't run smoothly at work. I work in retail when I'm not at University and though I love my job, sometimes we get some difficult people. Not often though, I think we're lucky in that respect.

We've had some nice people coming in to work recently but there's always something that can go wrong. :) This week it was an evacuation and also our air con broke, and England chose these past few days to get hot. Typical :) I work around things that melt really quickly and we usually keep the temperature at 19 celsius or slightly below but it shot up to 26 yesterday. 7 degrees celsius makes a lot of difference when half of your products are made of cocoa butter :) They smell good when they're melting, but don't sell so well :D

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redoren May 31 2008, 21:17:42 UTC

LOL! No need to beg, I'm writing more now (well obviously not right this second because I'm typing this, but I'll have a new part out tonight hopefully)

splodge04 May 31 2008, 17:43:56 UTC

LMAO that was awesome. All the things that Tory was asking him and then the whole speaker thing at the end. Genius :D yey for fic :D

redoren May 31 2008, 21:18:46 UTC

I have to admit, I use Tory like a crazy person. She features in more and more of my fics because she's just one of those characters who manages to move things along and support the story line and the other characters who are usually the ones I'm focusing on. She's a good support-character in fics :)

Glad you liked this :D