In No Particular Order: Part Four

Jan 06, 2008 02:23

This story was apparently too large to post in one go so I've split it down into a few parts in the hopes that this will work :)

In No Particular Order
Part Four
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: set near the end of season three with some minor spoilers for that season.

He was about to argue but saw the fire in her eyes and the fierce look on her face again.

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flamingo55 January 6 2008, 03:54:29 UTC
Oh, this is fabulous! I loved it - so very creative, and you could feel the "Laura and Bill" vibe despite the fact that they weren't together during most of it.

Thanks SO much for including the list, I was about to scream when it ended and I still didn't know what was on it! (And I agree with Bill - 20.5 is the best part, indeed.)

Thanks for sharing this!

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caramelapples11 January 6 2008, 07:49:48 UTC
This was awesome! Thanks so much for writing this! I loved every single part of it!

It's so incredibly creative and different from what I have ever read before and you've done such a great job in keeping everyone in character! Playful Laura is so fun. She would be such a fun roommate! :D

Love the A/R-ness of it. Not overdone but the current is there.

LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Wonderful job! You should write another fic soon!

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gypsygem81 January 6 2008, 10:29:43 UTC
Oh wow, this is amazing! Really funny and clever and certainly my favourite AR story I've read!! Thank you so much!

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laharah January 6 2008, 11:41:01 UTC
WOW!!! ... This was awesome. I had a smile on my face all the way through it *nods* ... this really made my day :D

and I am sooo glad you included the list. I was really wondering what all the points where ... the best ones are #20 & #21 ... *sigh* ... though they are all sooo funny

write more like this please :D

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setsunacutey January 6 2008, 12:08:57 UTC
Point 20 and 21 were just perfect. As were most of the points, really. I had a great time reading this fic. Stylistically it had quite some typo's, but it was okay, really, since the story was so much fun. Thank you, you made me giggle and swoon! :)

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