Small stand alone (for now) fic: The Order

Feb 06, 2008 19:06

I'm sorry...I really am sorry, I don't know what got into me when I was writing this. I don't usually write something so short and though I often enjoy a bit of angst...well this was well beyond what I usually write. Anyway I figured I'd post it here for now, who knows, maybe there will be more later but for now this is it.

Again, I'm sorry. :( ( Read more... )

a/r, the order, fic

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splodge04 February 6 2008, 20:54:41 UTC
OOOOOOOOOOH Angsty! I love it!
Laura as a Cylon, how very interesting.
I thought it was ace :) You could even maybe, as the next part *nudge nudge* write about what happened before :)

Loved it!!

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redoren February 6 2008, 20:58:36 UTC
LOL! What happened leading up to this and what happens afterwards might both be in the next part if I write it. Which I probably will :)

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splodge04 February 6 2008, 21:09:25 UTC
Yey *sits patiently*

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tjonesy February 6 2008, 20:56:41 UTC
Oh. My. God. Great story. Kickass ending. That's exactly what would happen in this situation. Still, I hope season 4 doesn't end like this.

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redoren February 6 2008, 21:07:03 UTC
Thank you and I totaly agree that if season four ended like this I would probably kick off big time :) Mind you, there are lots of things I'm scared they'll do with season 4. I wish it was here already!

I picture this story AU half way through season four. I have ideas for this little AU universe before and after the airlocking incident. It's one of those things, it was only meant as a little drabble but as soon as it was done I was thinking up how they got there and what would happen next. I think it might all have to come out in a sequel if only to amuse myself :)

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childminerva February 6 2008, 22:07:28 UTC
ZOMG...this was all great and angsty and then...then ending! That killed me. Just killed me. Because that's totally what Laura would do. Bill would never be able to go through with it and Laura would have to make the hard call for both of them.
Bravo.

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redoren February 6 2008, 22:54:10 UTC
Glad you liked it. I'm afraid I've gotten a bit carried away and now there's a whole big story surrounding it. I was trying to write the next part to The Ionian Curse but that's going to have to wait while this is fresh in my head. :) Next part due tomorrow.

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redoren February 6 2008, 23:22:28 UTC
Hi! Just friended you cause Eeeee I love your comments :)

I just took a peek at your LJ and you're as obsessed about BSG as I am and you like Mary McDonnell movies as well (she's missed out on some awards she totally should have won!). Have you seen Evidence of Blood?

Ooo, I have a question for people regarding this new fic and I could use your insight. I'll pop the question in a post on my LJ now. :)

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childminerva February 6 2008, 23:34:26 UTC
aw thanks!
Yes, I am a huge BSG, A/R, MM fan...I have not seen Evidence of Blood, but I really want to.

I'll be sure to check out your question...

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redoren February 7 2008, 13:03:04 UTC
Thanks :) I really love getting comments!

The next part should be a prequel leading up to this story then I'm working on the sequel. I kept getting ideas and couldn't stop so the first part of the prequel should be out soon.

Love the cookies! Thanks! :)

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franglaisy February 8 2008, 11:09:15 UTC
Loved it! Thankyou for sharing! :-)

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