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inner_demons_ January 12 2008, 00:22:55 UTC
Awww! I loved the little prince references :D Well done! Can't wait to get to the next part <3

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redpocket January 16 2008, 22:01:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :>

XD Also, you totally get virtual cookies for picking that. ♥ I didn't think it would be hard, but not everyone's read the book and remembers the scene, yet it's so funny. :3

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inner_demons_ January 16 2008, 22:05:20 UTC
:D! I love that book. You did such a good job of slipping it in there ♥

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redpocket January 17 2008, 00:55:10 UTC
It was harder not to slip it in. XD It really just wanted to write itself in. :>

Thinking of piloting and crashes in the middle of nowhere reminds me of Le Petit Prince anyway. XD

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ketchupblood January 12 2008, 03:25:15 UTC
You know... Leaving the little "continue to part x" comments at the end are very distracting, because then I keep trying to click them, with the vain hope that it'll actually be a cleverly disguised link or something, but it's NOT. -pulls at hair-

That was beautifully done, though. I'm normally not much for plot in fanfics (since fanfics are more about character development for me, and few people manage to have both) but this was done so amazingly well. I was holding my breath for so much of the time I was reading this. Amazing fic!

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redpocket January 17 2008, 00:57:50 UTC
Haha! XD I'm just being lazy in posting the last part, that's all. Well, laziness and also extreeeeme busyness. >__< And because I have to write in the html myself. XD

*pets* I'll probably have it up in a couple of days. ^__^ It's been all written and finished for ages. XD

Thank you! :D I've never thought of people not managing to have both plot and character development, but I'm glad if you think I've succeeded at both. ^^ I think sometimes they go hand in hand, but I do agree sometimes people are weak on characterisation or weak on plot; writers just tend to sometimes be strong in one area and not so in another, I guess. :3

XDD I hope your face didn't go blue. ♥

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twitch500lair January 12 2008, 07:34:23 UTC
Wow. Just wow. Your have no idea how creative and interesting I find this story. It's so addicting. I'm in love with your story. =] UPDATE SOON! LIKE REALLY REALLY SOON! <3

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redpocket January 17 2008, 01:02:46 UTC
Thank you~! :D :D Wow, I'm so flattered. ♥

I hope you'll enjoy the next part as much, when I get around to posting it. XD

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norcalsanjifan January 15 2008, 05:52:44 UTC
This is such a breathtaking fic. It had me on the edge of my seat most of the time and I absolutely love the detail and the thought that was put into the plot. It's great. Please please please continue it(soon) <3 ^_^

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redpocket January 17 2008, 11:48:44 UTC
Thank you~! :D

Seeing the word 'breathtaking' made me really happy. XD I was holding my breath while I wrote one or two of the scenes so I wondered if I could make anyone else do it while they were reading. :>

I'll probably get around to posting the rest of it tomorrow. :D; I've had it finished and sitting around for a while but wrestling with LJ doesn't appeal to me. XD

Thanks for your comment~ :3

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petapepy January 16 2008, 19:37:50 UTC
This is beautiful. I love the way your writing flows and how you've captured the characters.

I don't know what to say but brilliant.

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redpocket January 17 2008, 11:50:17 UTC
Eeee! Thank you~! XD

I had fun writing them in this setting. :> Somehow it lent itself to easily flowing dialogue so I had fun with Fuji's mouth. XD That sounds a bit wrong, but anyhow.

^__^ I'm happy you're enjoying it~!

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