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Let it Snow [oneshot]

Feb 10, 2011 21:18

Title: Let it Snow [oneshot]
Author: 시몬 (redrum_moon)
Pairing: junseung; (junhyung-centric)
Rating: PG
Summary: Junhyung hates it but snow is the only link he has with someone he doesn't hate at all...
Author's Notes: xanderleach is my un-beta reader ('cause her fics are so damn good and i like her very very much) so 고마워
First real fanfiction ever, so be ( Read more... )

#junseung, #fanfiction

Comments 26

redrum_moon February 10 2011, 20:57:33 UTC

SPOT FOR ALMIGHTYHAN

mydinoeats February 11 2011, 02:21:05 UTC

Awwh! how sweet ^___________^ hyunseung is the snow ^______^ <3
it was really cute :]

But may i suggest next time, you use a beta before posting it? You have some grammar problems and your stanza is kind of off ^^'''

But other than that, i really like how your plot/storyline went :D

mydinoeats February 11 2011, 06:49:57 UTC

oh, im almightyhan from tumblr if you havent already guessed ^^''

redrum_moon February 11 2011, 17:48:18 UTC

lol the thing is Maikee jut had the time to read it, not to correc it.
And I'm sorry about grammar fault, English is not my first language at all, even if I love it so much.

Do you want to be my un-beta reader too next time haha ?

thanks dear <3

the_blackorder February 10 2011, 21:31:54 UTC

Awww this was funny and sweet but a little angsty in the middle but I'm glad junseung turned out fine! LOL-ed at the fangirl part, it's just too cute ^^ good job there bb <3

redrum_moon February 11 2011, 17:50:38 UTC

hay thank you so much for reading it!

I still think Junseung can't go without angst, it makes their love more beautiful I guess ?

I can't let Junseung with an angsty thing, don't worry ^^

akinoyui February 11 2011, 01:16:42 UTC

awww~ at least now Junhyung has a reason to love snow...Hyunseung acted so adorably though ^^ and such a good son / brother / friend.. me likey <3

thanks for posting this!

redrum_moon February 12 2011, 18:16:54 UTC

He more wants Hyunseung than the snow I guess XD.
Hyunseung makes him forget what he hates the most, power of love ^^?

thanks for reading <3

xanderleach February 11 2011, 02:17:01 UTC

You posted this! I'm so glad you did! <3
I really fell in love with your writing style, honestly. It's like a collage of images and feelings. I can't describe thoroughly.

I would love to read more of your writings. :)

redrum_moon February 11 2011, 18:23:21 UTC

you're the last one I'm replying to this day, just because it means a lot to me.

I think I would never have written if I hadn't read your works. It's like ... it gave me the will to write I guess ?

And i'm so glad you red it, first, I admit I was expecting a lot of your reaction actually.

I'd love to please again with another fic, I hope so <3

teenageisland February 11 2011, 03:39:30 UTC

You had me worried with the hospital part for a wee bit, but (thankfully) everything turned out alright & very sweet :3

Loved the fact that Hyunseung's absence turned Junnie into a lyricist; making his absence his inspiration. I can definitely relate to that so.... yeah it was wonderful

^ ^

redrum_moon February 11 2011, 18:11:01 UTC

Oww I didn't think about hyunseung himself at the hospital haha.
lol no I care too much of Hyunseung to do something like this <3.

It's because i always loved Junhyung's writing, when I listen to Beast songs at first, Junhyung's parts are the most difficult to udnerstand for me ^^".
And I thought of this vid too : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nnv5UKfhTaw

thanks for commenting <3