I can't believe I forgot to post this here. I fixed the wonky formatting, a couple of things that nagged me and a few typos. All remaining mistakes are mine.
Aargh, I thought I had answer you earlier. I'm sorry! :(
I meant to write that reviews and comments are the icing on the cake for me, and I appreciate that you took the time to read and to tell me so. Thank you very much.
P.S. Would you mind if I submitted the story I wrote for you, Desheret, to fic archives? I really like this story and would like to see it up on TQP and on CM, if they like it too. :)
So many wonderful points it's hard to pull them all out. the image of Hermione struggling to get her trauma on parchment is profound and real. The way her feelings forced to write it, not in facts and events but in emotions really brings out the Hermione. The one who would break rules but only if she had to. I love the idea of her struggling to put the events in boxes that wouldn't contain it and being forced to break the rules.
I love how you defined the friendship so clearly. They were not predestined to do anything they choice to be loyal and to love each other.
Oh wow, what can I say but thank you for your kind comment. Hermione is such a beautiful, passionate, responsible and justice-seeking character, and I thought that putting her in a situation where she has to ponder on her possible legacy to the world could be a good way to explore the themes of memory, friendship and writing.
Oh dear *blush*...Thank you for reading. This was the toughest fic to write and to let go. I had an idea in my mind, and I'm sorry to say that this fic doesn't look at all like what I intended it to be. However, I'm thrilled that it found readers. :)
This piece was rec'd on crack_broom and I came over to take a look. I'm so glad I did as you've left me practically inarticulate with admiration. This is truly marvelous.
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complex, true. love it.
(sorry for the rubbish review. this deserves better)
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( I understand from the next comment that you recc'ed it. Thanks so much.)
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I meant to write that reviews and comments are the icing on the cake for me, and I appreciate that you took the time to read and to tell me so. Thank you very much.
P.S. Would you mind if I submitted the story I wrote for you, Desheret, to fic archives? I really like this story and would like to see it up on TQP and on CM, if they like it too. :)
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So many wonderful points it's hard to pull them all out.
the image of Hermione struggling to get her trauma on parchment is profound and real. The way her feelings forced to write it, not in facts and events but in emotions really brings out the Hermione. The one who would break rules but only if she had to. I love the idea of her struggling to put the events in boxes that wouldn't contain it and being forced to break the rules.
I love how you defined the friendship so clearly. They were not predestined to do anything they choice to be loyal and to love each other.
this was beautiful!
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I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it. Again, thank you.
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Simply beautiful! :)
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Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a kind comment. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this story! :-)
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