Everything Shines (Teddy Lupin)

[redsiodaslair]

Everything shines (Teddy Lupin)

Rating: R, for sensual themes
Pairing: Teddy/Victoire
Word count: ~ 5500 words
Summary: Teddy Lupin waits for Victoire Weasley to come back from an internship, only to be faced with a proposition.

A/N Part 3 of the ‘Ten Seductions' series. Ladies and gentlemen, be warned. Fluff ahead.

Comments

[twy]

Oh, it's lovely, Red!!!! I didn't want it to end. What can I do to convince you to continue with this and make it into a nice little fic over in Brazil? Well done!

[redsiodaslair]

I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

I'm toying with the idea of bringing them to Brazil, but I think I'll have to wait for the inspiration to hit. Thanks so much for reading. ♥

[rose_starr]

Oh, how I love this story! I love Teddy's uncertainty with himself and how Victoire is completely confident in his qualifications (and how she refuses to give up in her attempts to convince him)!! I love hos he longs for her and how his love for her runs deep (and that he hasn't always felt this way - that he hurt her before he realized how he felt about her is so believeable and makes his feelings mean all the more!!

And as I've told you before, Harry is just incredible in this story! You just know how much he loves Teddy and considers him family!! And that James and Lily do, too!! Just perfect!!

And finally shouts out for Bill and Fleur being totally awesome (as usual)!!!

Seriously, hon, this story is fabulous!!

*has no appropriate icon so uses Bill/Fleur*

[redsiodaslair]

Aw, thanks for being so supportive while I was angsting on this one. There is a little bit of Fleur in Victoire. ;-)

I like Harry so much. He's having a very Sirius moment here. I'm glad you felt like he's cool.

*hugs*

[shiiki]

Seconding the request for bringing them to Brazil and carrying on!

Seriously, Red, this is a lovely view of them. You were able to show us just how this particular couple ticks.

[redsiodaslair]

Hee, I might, if I come up with a good idea!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading. It's fun to write straight away the relationship and try to create a feel of familiarity. :-)

[mrdarcyslover]

I thought you gave up on the Seduction Series and I so happy you didn't. I love your writing style and expecially how you manage to portray JKR's charachters so truthfully and brilliantly.
In a wave of nostalgia for HP series and most of all for your stories, I've re-read some of your beautiful fic. And the thing is, I never get tired of them. Some make me tear up, others have all warm inside(LOL), all of them make me want to rush to my room and read HP books from A to Z!
I know I'm not really reviewing this fic in particular but I wanted you to know that your stories never chase to amaze me!
Now I do hope you'll continue with Seduction Series, either with Canon and with non Canon Pairings (I'd kill to read another George/Luna fic of yours...I'm just suggesting LOL)
Either way I'll be delighted with reading other yours pieces of art!

[redsiodaslair]

Wow, you really know how to brighten one's day! Thank you very much for reading! ♥

Thanks so much for your encouraging words. I'm very touched that these stories I scribble make you want to read the books again! I'm not sure there is a higher compliment for a ff writer, honestly.

I'm planning to continue the series...G and L, uh? Mmm. I'll see what I can do! I thank you for taking the time to leave me such a kind comment. While writing those stories are so much fun, knowing that others enjoy them as well is very awesome. :-)

[mrdarcyslover]

*blushes*
Now you're flattering me... I only said the truth, your fics truly are amazing, you should know it.
About the G/L suggestion I was joking (well,maybe half joking :D). I know for sure I'll love everything written by you.
Oh by the way I apologize for all the mistakes I make in my comments: English is not my mothertongue!

[mrdarcyslover]

the comment above is mine, of course. I was not logged in so it isn't that clear! LOL

[redsiodaslair]

Heehee! I had guessed it was you. :D

As for the G/L...well, maybe I can work something in my original idea? We'll see how this works out.

Oh, and I'm not a native speaker either, so no worries about your English! *hugs*