The Story Has Just Begun pt. 2

[redsn0wflakes]

Kurosaki growled into his pillow as wails ripped through the quiet night.  He buried his head under the pillow as they grew louder, intent on trying to continue sleeping, only to have a cold foot kick his shin.

“It’s your turn,” she mumbled sleepily.  He hissed as the kicks increased in frequency and strength.  Throwing his pillow at her head, he

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[missiemae]

Le gasp!

I did not expect that. A beautiful love child from our Tsukuro. Beautiful! I always love the idea of a Tsukuro baby.

I also love the idea of Kurosaki gaining some sense and realizing what exactly Tsurara is to him. That he could really live happily ever after. I love that he also remembers her and it gives some reason as to why he stared at her so enticingly when he saves her on the tracks. I like that there is a reason though I also enjoy that he was possibly lovestruck the moment he saw her.

This was so cute and it really satisfied my appetite. Btw totally love that Kuro throws the pillow at Tsurara's head. Lol.

I love u. Thank you for writing this. ♥

[redsn0wflakes]

My gosh, that Tsukuro baby would be the most adorable thing in the world. [Squees] A Yamaki baby would be nice too. lol.

Oh yes, love at first sight. That's exactly what I thought when I first saw Kurosaki too! There's just so much going on with that gaze...almost like "I wanna carry you back to my apartment and do bad things with you." Or just him blanking out because she's so beautiful.

Ahaha...I love to imagine Tsukuro's married life together. Or, at least their life with a child [cough]Dazzle[cough]. Lol.

Thank you for reading! And your long comments too! You make me so happy. =]

[hyun_jae09]

Love it.

[:

Though it is a stretch from the usual Tsukuro relationship, it has a cute and sweet touch that everyone is used to.

Nonetheless, good work. -throws confetti-

[redsn0wflakes]

Exactly. It's....happy. That's why it's...kinda off. xD But hey, this is mine, so I gotta make it all fluffy, eh? xD Make up for all that angst in the drama.

[ruing]

This is gold!

I love stories with babies! a Tsukuro one would be so cute, imagine Tsurara's eyes and Kurosaki's lips. :D
Yep, that moment on the train track caught me when I first watched that darn drama that got me so addicted to this couple. It's like he totally forgot that a train was coming once he saw her!

nice nice!

[redsn0wflakes]

Thank you!

Oh, now that'll make such a lovely baby. [Dies of jealousy]

[xcry]

Wow, a Tsukuro baby! We really need more of those type of stories. I just love seeing how much Kuro can change when a baby comes into his life, a baby that's his so to speak, xD.

Like they always say, a baby can bring two fated people closer together...most of the time, lol.

[redsn0wflakes]

Ahaha...agreed! I think I was kinda inspired by your "Dazzle" fic (which was very lovely). Hope you don't mind me mooching off of your idea. ^^;

[babyshithead]

SO CUTE, I LOVE IT! their baby would be so cute, and yamapi as a daddy, awwwwwwwwwwwww!