turtle's hhyl smut #4

[redturtle95]

I AM BACK!! DOUBLE EVENT! LUXIUFER JUST POSTED CHAPTER 8 PART 3 OF HER FIC!! --> www.luxiufer.live journal.com
Muahahaha! Drown in all this hhyl!!!
Okay okay, here's my #4! Takes place between the first and second halves of chapter 18.
Warning: adult content Turtle's hhyl smut #4

Comments

the first

[luxiufer]

Yay....
i am the first.... ahahahah

....aah..... thank you for the hard work.... XD

Re: the first

[luxiufer]

alright, here is my real comment, XD

there are still some scenes that a bit off, but you are doing GREAT!!!!!

Jing was using all his might, not his drug, lol...
too short of the smut, but you are trying hard to get into Jing's feeling, i give you high points for this,but again, the feelings you get is more of the Jing from book one. his regret, his melancholy, his compassion.

and I Am NO DEMON!!!!
how could you accuse me for being a lowly demon??
I AM THE LORD OF THE DEMON!!!!!

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

*cough from sore throat*

Re: the first

[redturtle95]

Hehehe yes demon lord your majesty
Feel free to change it and repost hahaha

[passiflora182]

Thank you for this nice surprise ^^

[anita0179]

awesome and soo cute ^^ love this

[mrsseien]

wow very good! I could read about these two every day. It would be great if the original story was filled with some of warm scenes like this one... :)

[redturtle95]

Hehehe glad you like it!
Yeah I wanted to write something on the sweet side hahaha

[saltypizzas]

Best porn ever. (':

[redturtle95]

Why thank you ( : <
It's my....pleasure

[saltypizzas]

I'm patiently waiting for more. (':