Comments | redturtle95: turtle's hhyl fic let #9

redturtle95

turtle's hhyl fic let #9

Jun 22, 2014 04:28

A very happy birthday to our great lord luxiufer ( Read more... )

#9, ficlet, hua hua you long, hhyl, turtle's

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redturtle95 June 23 2014, 03:15:06 UTC

Hehehe thnk you! I'm glad it was satisfactory but i personally thought it was too short. But unfortunately i have no idea how to nake it longer haaha

mrsseien June 21 2014, 21:09:49 UTC

wah, since the happy end in the novel I almost forgot how it all began... this got my memories back... I am depressed, but if that was the goal then 'mission complete' for you

redturtle95 June 23 2014, 03:16:11 UTC

Heheheh noooo o t wasnt my mission, but its still a good thing you felt so strongly about it XD

Me likey panisal June 21 2014, 22:15:10 UTC

I think that it is very very good, actually profound in its depiction of Lu Cang as a rape victim. I think the original text tends to gloss over some of the deeply emotional stuff and this piece expands on the characters' frames of mind perfectly. Personally I don't think that any of it was OOC at all. I like this fic as much as any of the smuttier ones (yes, yes I know that this one has smut too) or even more, but I am a sucker for angst, so there's that. :p

Since you won't say when... then Happy Birthday in Advance! May your shell grow ever more hardy to defend you from forks... XD

Re: Me likey panisal June 21 2014, 22:39:11 UTC

Eh btw, is this #9 or #10? Heading says #10...

Re: Me likey redturtle95 June 23 2014, 03:19:14 UTC

Oops ps, yeah its supposed to be #9.

And thank you, those were my exact thoughts when i wrote this haha, the book doesnt put much focus on emotionaly development . this definitely wont be my last piece that filld up the gaps in tge novel

Re: Me likey panisal June 23 2014, 10:25:33 UTC

No need to PS, we know you must have PTSD from the constant demands for Smut + assorted threats from a certain SOMEONE... :p

I think all those bits where the author copped out from having to write emotional development by having Lu Cang faint should be filled in... *sprays fire-retardant on hint* XD

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kurenai_kimitsu June 21 2014, 23:04:42 UTC

._____.

now what happened after the brothel tower? thats what I wanna know~
cant believe Lu Cant managed to keep his sanity

redturtle95 June 23 2014, 03:26:51 UTC

I plan to do something like that in the future
...but its just a plan for now...

kurenai_kimitsu June 23 2014, 03:38:57 UTC

Aww make it happen. Cuz lu cang must be strong mentally ... Like a god.... To be fine after jing's constant abuse. :x

redturtle95 June 23 2014, 19:44:03 UTC

Ahahaha it might happen. Imo hes not 100% fine but fine enough i guess hehe

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ichiisane_saya June 22 2014, 05:34:03 UTC

it was unexpected of what usually do what time frame you make fics about. I wish 10 would contain more smut of mutual pleasure. :D

redturtle95 June 23 2014, 03:20:39 UTC

Yes hhaha thats why i chose to do one shots instead of long fics...so i can hop here and there whenever i want ~

ichiisane_saya June 23 2014, 13:55:31 UTC

ahh, :) that's one of the joys of writing. being free. I'm suchj a fan of your smut versions pls. do write more. :D

redturtle95 June 23 2014, 19:47:17 UTC

Oh no i haven't been writing enough smut that has mutual pleasure? Ah but i thought 1,2,4,5,6 and 8 all had prettt good mutual pleasure smut *cries*
But do not worry friend i will definitely write more smut