Love the way you present Jing's feelings when he 1st thought Lu Cang was dead, the way the boiling rage was covering the feelings he wasn't prepared to admit to himself (well, that's how I read it anyway). It makes so much sense and fits in with how events play out later too.
And the way you expanded upon Lu Cang's bitterness over what Xizhen did to him. I got why he was angry when I was reading the translations, but somehow, it's much more visceral here.
Paiseh, cannot think of any more comments liao, cos mind blown lol.
Wow ! What a violent Jing ! But a good chapter. I was so happy to see your update. You make my day. Thank you ! And if this story lasts more than 10 chapters, I will be happy. I like it a lot.
Thank you so much! Yeah, I wanted to upplay the violence :x Haha I'm glad you like it, I was starting to think it was getting too long XD But it seems you guys don't mind, for which I am grateful
Yep, that's the point of this long fic, to bridge the stuff missed out in the novel. Actually I think its all very crucial to plot+character development but the author skipped it all sigh
Ahhh, was it really such a long time?? I write whenever I can, but I'm really busy with work and studies so I gotta apologize for my slow updates DX But I will surely complete this fic and more after Thank you for being such a faithful reader! *kisses u*
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Hilarious XD
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Love the way you present Jing's feelings when he 1st thought Lu Cang was dead, the way the boiling rage was covering the feelings he wasn't prepared to admit to himself (well, that's how I read it anyway). It makes so much sense and fits in with how events play out later too.
And the way you expanded upon Lu Cang's bitterness over what Xizhen did to him. I got why he was angry when I was reading the translations, but somehow, it's much more visceral here.
Paiseh, cannot think of any more comments liao, cos mind blown lol.
*Salute Angst Maestro*
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I was so happy to see your update. You make my day.
Thank you !
And if this story lasts more than 10 chapters, I will be happy. I like it a lot.
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Yeah, I wanted to upplay the violence :x
Haha I'm glad you like it, I was starting to think it was getting too long XD
But it seems you guys don't mind, for which I am grateful
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Actually I think its all very crucial to plot+character development but the author skipped it all sigh
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There was so much I wanted to know that the author left out
Until I couldn't take it, so here I am, writing this..
*sobs*
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I hope you will be ble to post in no time, and don't worry, even if this story take more than 10 capters.... we will enjoy it until the end ;-)
thank you!!!
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But I will surely complete this fic and more after
Thank you for being such a faithful reader! *kisses u*
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