Turtle's HHYL fanfic chapter 5

[redturtle95]

Hi everyone! Turtle here. After days of slaving in school, I finally have the time to get down to writing (and drawing) yay

Comments

uuuummmm

[anonymous]

Really like it. .
Keep up the good work. .
Hope to read ff after chap 10 of the original book though. .
Tq.

Re: uuuummmm

[redturtle95]

Thank you so much!
Yep, this fic will cover the events after chapter 10 too hehehe

[ext_2794650]

the truth is finally revealed
unlucky lu cang bear the faults of others

[redturtle95]

Yes, poor him ) :
Thank you for reading!

uuuummmm

[ext_2794650]

OMG. .i'll really appreciateappreciate that. .
Tq always.
U make my day. .*happy*

nice work

[anonymous]

I think this is your best fanfiction. I mised this part in original work and you worked it perfectly. I will wait for next update, because it i want to know what will Jing react and will he think.
Thank you for your wondeful works

Re: nice work

[redturtle95]

Ahh thank you so much XD
I see you're another silent stalker of my page...hehehe

[mlle_dutaz]

Writing amazing like it, it's like the original copy
I read all the previous chapters, and it was good and beautiful and answers almost all my questions .

but .. but i have one question :
( why Xizhen didn't plan to falsification lu cang death ?
these will be butter for all and easier ? .. right ? )

we whiting a next chapter so please Don't delay as much as you can ,
Thank you alot 🌸

[captaintsukiko]

Probable because of her guilt, she's not a very good person as we know.

[redturtle95]

Shhhh!!! Don't spoil the plot!!
Thank you for reading XD
Ahahaha I won't delay if I can help it, but I'm really very busy

[mlle_dutaz]

ok ok shhhh ! XD

good Luck in your work ~

[ririn_lee1]

wow!this is really good. it feels like a missing chapter of original books.
i always want to know how did jing realized his feeling to lu cang for the first time. your portray is quite spot on. esp the part when jing found out lu cang was gone, jing seems so shocked, full of rage and in dazed? so much for a great jing who always has a clear mind. xd
thou one part a bit missed which is the part of lu cang sent letter to his brothers. i remember in original fic i think lu cang went to see his brother and moved together to another secluded mountain. overall the fic is so good. thanks for the hard work.
pls update soon.
now i am waiting for the part when they both met in the river. xd

[redturtle95]

Waah, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
Everyone has a tipping point, Jing included (;

The book didn't state explicitly, I plan to address that in later chaoters