Fatal Choice Part 2 B

Nov 11, 2009 18:17

                He closed his eyes and took in a shuddering breath, before gritting his teeth, opening them again and forcing the gun into Kazuya’s mouth.

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‘What the fuck, Akanishi?’ The bosses shout dragged him from his thoughts, and he realised in a heartbeat that he’d hesitated for a moment too many. Isamu was reaching ( Read more... )

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lelouch7 November 12 2009, 09:02:48 UTC
gosh kazuya still shot jin
this is so intense
love it
cant wait for updates
and secret and lies too
thank you!

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redturtleotaku December 20 2009, 12:18:42 UTC
Hi!

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad that you're enjoying this. Sorry I'm so slow with updates lately. I'll try to have something updated soon!

Thanks!

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lelouch7 December 22 2009, 15:27:59 UTC
that's ok! take your time
RL must come first right?

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kawaiikame November 12 2009, 10:59:28 UTC
wow that was amazing 8D
but ne did jin died? I wish not though D:
I hope you'll write the third part someday :)

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redturtleotaku December 20 2009, 12:19:50 UTC
Thanks!

Well the story isn't over yet!

Sorry updates are taking me so long! I'll try to get this finished and updated soon!

Laura

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snow_meow November 12 2009, 18:13:44 UTC
Kame shot Jin? WHY!!!

I cannot wait for the next chapter.

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redturtleotaku December 20 2009, 12:20:33 UTC
He did indeed! You'll have to wait and see!

Sorry it's taking me so long to update! I'll try to get a move on and update soon!

Thanks!

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redturtleotaku December 20 2009, 12:21:29 UTC
Hi!

There is another part coming! As much as I enjoy cliff-hangers, I couldn't end a story like that!

Sorry that it's taking me so long to update! I'll do my best to do so soon!

Laura

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blue_eye1 November 12 2009, 21:52:27 UTC
You have no idea what you are doing to me writing such a damn good story. Even I had no idea until I found myself crying after finishing this part. Right now my mind is full of many different emotions and I'm torn apart ( ... )

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redturtleotaku December 20 2009, 12:23:47 UTC
Hey

Thanks for your thoughtful comment. I always enjoy reading what you've got to say about my fics! This wasn't the end of the story, I'm just awfully slow at updating these days! Sorry about that!

I'm going to explore Kazuya's character more in the final part of this story. I hope that you like it!

Awww Thank You! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one too!

*hugs*

Laura

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