The Ash amongst the Stars - Chapter 1

[redturtleotaku]

Title: The Ash amongst the Stars

Genre: Historical, Angst, Violence, Smut, Fluff, AU

Pairing: Pin

Rating: NC-17

Summary: In a place where love is seen as the ultimate weakness and honour is worth more than life itself, a treacherous assassin returns to claim a young warrior as his own. With the stench of death surrounding them and their history

Comments

[fond_of_pin]

I'm so glad you found the time and mood to write again. During your absence I kept watching your journal for updates of "Solar Eclipse" because I loved it so much, and I still hope you'll resume it one day.

But right now I enjoy your new fic. The title alone is beautiful - "The Ash amongst the Stars". It gives my mind something to ponder. I love your style of writing, but also the plots you create around the boys, and the atmosphere you conjure up. They're quite far from any cliches and I appreciate this a lot.

Please keep on writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. ♥

[redturtleotaku]

I'm glad that I did too! I really did miss writing, I just couldn't seem to get into the right frame of mind!

Solar Eclipse is your favourite? It's been an awfully long time since I've worked on that (I'm so sorry!), I'll have to re-read it and see if I can get back into it!

I'm really happy that you like my new story! I wasn't sure how people would react to it, as I already have so much work unfinished.

Thank you so much for the feedback! :)

[blue_eye1]

I knew I missed your writing but only after reading this I realised how much I missed it ^^
Your descriptions of scenes, emotions. The words and phrases that you use, especially the phrases. It all gives remarkable feelings and I love it ^^

I really like the way that you entwine their peaceful past with the terror and debris because of the attack. Jin's coldness and superiority with Pi's dismay.
And there is also Jin's temporary tenseness. Would he fight to protect Tomohisa or would he chose to kill him? I really wished to know that.

Thank You for sharing and I'm waiting for more to come :)

[redturtleotaku]

*hugs* Bless you!

I must say that I'm relieved that you like this. I felt like I had to start something new to get my confidence back, but I wasn't sure how people would react!

As always I appreciate the thoughfulness of your comments. I hope that you enjoy the rest of this fic. I'm working on it now.

Thank you for commenting! :)

[moritsuki]

I like this, it's interesting ^^
And I love reading period fic, I'm looking forward to the rest of this ^^

[redturtleotaku]

I'm glad that you find it interesting! I enjoy period fic too. I'll try my best to do it justice!

I'm working on the next chapter now!

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[lelouch7]

gosh
i always love your stories and this one too
wow, this is so intense and angsty
is jin a ninja clan or something?
the characterization is awesome
and i love how you put all je boys in your stories
thank you
and waiting for more

[redturtleotaku]

:D I'm glad that I didn't disappoint!

You know me, I like intense and angsty! :p

Yeah, Jin's basically a ninja. But I want to avoid using that term, I don't know why but I think it makes the concept sound kind of comical. Does that make sense?

Thank you for your feedback! I'm happy that you're enjoying this!

I'm working on the next chapter now! ^_^

[lelouch7]

yes i know what you mean
this reminds me a bit of lian hearn's otori clan saga she called the ninjas as the tribe
i love this universe a lot
thanks again

[redturtleotaku]

haha maybe you caught onto my inspiration ;D

[pop_power]

Lol i just realised that your comment thing says 'sing to me'... I aint gonna sing to you!
But I shall comment!
Poor PiPi... he's confused and... well... hurting xD
and I really do love the flashbacks, it shows how close they were. They're talking and messing on like they would normally do :D
And Tegoshi! I love a bit of Tegoshi.
I get the feeling this is going to be epic. Your writing always draws me in and I'm glad you're writing again! FINALLY! lol

[redturtleotaku]

Beth...you know that you love singing to me!

Pipi? Oh dear lmao.

I'm glad that you like the flashbacks, there will be more!

I dedicate my Tegoshi to you then!

I try to make everything epic haha I need to calm down! *hides* It took me long enough to get back into it ne?