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The Ash amongst the stars - Chapter 3

Jul 08, 2010 15:28

( Chapter 3 )

Comments 25

fullhouse_10 July 8 2010, 20:46:37 UTC

Love this chapter ♥
I loves the flashback, it's somehow sweet how they met for the first time :)
I can't help to love when Jin manhandles Yamapi XD
They both also seem so lost and troubled about themselves ;__;
Cnat' wait to read more of it ;p

Thank you!

redturtleotaku July 9 2010, 06:50:36 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Ah the flashbacks...there'll be more in the next chapter!
Haha the occasional manhandling is necessary ;)
I'm pushing for some character growth/maturation with this fic...hope that I can do it!
Thank you for your kind comment :)

dunealia July 9 2010, 10:31:34 UTC

I felt like such a stalker, checking your lj so often for any update. ^_^ It payed off! I loved it!

redturtleotaku July 9 2010, 12:08:41 UTC

Haha stalk away! Really glad that you liked it! Thank you! :)

dunealia July 10 2010, 02:53:18 UTC

You were in Japan? o.0

redturtleotaku July 10 2010, 23:01:07 UTC

Yeah, went for three weeks to a summer school sorta thing. Was fun! :)

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bluelillie July 11 2010, 09:56:18 UTC

Very fascinating story!

I am really interested now in what Jin is trying to do. Why is he hiding his feelings from yamapi?

Can't wait for the next update.

redturtleotaku July 11 2010, 12:32:51 UTC

Hi! I'm glad that you think so!

I've got plans to expand this story, so I hope that you still like it when I do.

Thank you for reading and commenting and I'm glad that you like it so far! :)

blue_eye1 July 12 2010, 18:05:03 UTC

This chapter is absolutely great and best so far. You did a really good work with it. This time you showed very well and clearly conflicts of emotions that have place in minds and hearts of both of them.

I like very much the flashbacks because in my opinion they showed quite good, parts of Jin's and Pi's characters. It made me to understand both of them bit better. It made me even more wonder what happened to Jin that made him like this. He want to reach out but...

I really loved this chapter even if my comment might have no sense (it's just too hot here to think properly).
Thank You and I'm waiting for more :D

The Ash amongst the stars - Chapter 3 agustin1982 July 13 2010, 20:21:24 UTC

What happen to Jin actually? He is so desperate? Make me curious with the next chapter xD and beautiful Jin, hahaha I am sorry but I love word of beautiful Jin xD Waiting the next chapter and give you hugs sooooo tight~ [ps. Please continue secret and lies fics>< pretty please><]