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The Ash amongst the Stars - Chapter 4

Jul 15, 2010 22:26

Despite the extraordinary level of skill that he demonstrated at such a young age, Akanishi Jin could take little pride or pleasure in his current task. He narrowed his eyes as the shadow of a man fell over him; the oldest and supposedly wisest of the elders, Takeyama.

‘I know that you can work faster, Jin.’ The tip of the ( Read more... )

the ash amongst the stars - fic

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snow_meow July 16 2010, 17:58:10 UTC

I swear I am really suspicious of Jun and Tegoshi. I wonder how ambitious is Jun and at what lengths will he go to achieve his ambition.

I wonder what Jin is going to say to his father. Somehow his father does not seem to be the loving type but more interested in protecting his lineage and power status of the family.

redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:50:34 UTC

Jun and Tegoshi are so much fun to write, but yeah Jun definitely has his own agenda.

I'm working on Jin's conversation with his father now. I'm hoping to update soon. I hope that you like it! :)

dunealia July 17 2010, 02:28:15 UTC

Both past and present are very intriguing. I am very much enjoying this story and can't wait for more, as always ^_^ I hope you are enjoying writing it as well?

redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:51:28 UTC

Awww I'm glad that you're enjoying it. I'm hoping that it'll get a bit more dramatic and exciting soon! And yeah I'm definitely enjoying writing this one! Thanks as always! :)

dunealia July 27 2010, 19:41:47 UTC

Downloading the Bandage movie right now! Watched it last night (skipped through it to see Jin because it was 5:30 by the time I went to bed!) and it was even better than I thought it would be. I've been telling people for 3yrs that he can act!

lelouch7 July 19 2010, 07:47:12 UTC

i love jin and jun banter
i want to know more about the village
:)

redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:52:13 UTC

Haha Jin and Jun's rivalry is great fun for me to write.
I'm working on the next chapter now! I hope that you like it! Thanks for commenting :)

momopii July 19 2010, 08:07:33 UTC

wow . .thank you,I LOVE it. .XD

redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:52:57 UTC

You're welcome! You LOVE it? Well that's great! Thank you so much! :D

The Ash amongst the Stars - Chapter 4 agustin1982 July 20 2010, 05:34:10 UTC

Uuh Matsumoto is jerk*kick him* I am so curious with Jin plan? Can Jin save both of them? Jin's father so scary>< update soon ne! Give you hugs soooo tight~

Re: The Ash amongst the Stars - Chapter 4 redturtleotaku July 27 2010, 13:54:13 UTC

Hahaha Matsumoto does need a good kicking ne? I'm working on the next chapter now, and Jin's plans are ebing revealed!
Thanks for the hugs! Really glad that you're enjoying this! Thank you!