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redturtleotaku

The Ash amongst the Stars Chapter 5

Jul 28, 2010 02:15

( Chapter 5 )

Comments 11

snow_meow July 28 2010, 13:29:36 UTC

Interesting.
So the true Nishkido heir is dead and in his place Jin put Pi.
Hmmm, I wonder if Pi would be willing to do as Jin told his father.

redturtleotaku July 29 2010, 20:10:40 UTC

The main story is coming into play now, and more will be revealed soon. Thanks for reading and commenting!

pop_power July 29 2010, 11:54:51 UTC

BUT IS IT TRUE?!!!

Omg as if Ryo and Pi are like half brothers... and why is Matsumoto such a bitch?!
I want Yamapi to kick arse in some way...
Thank you for thiis! Well done I think it's coool!

redturtleotaku July 29 2010, 20:11:47 UTC

MAYBE!

Matsumoto is my bitch...I love him hahaha.

Maybe I will answer your wish...;D

Glad you liked it! Thanks!

wasabidreams July 29 2010, 14:27:15 UTC

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sorry 'bout the keysmash. lol.

redturtleotaku July 29 2010, 20:12:05 UTC

Woah. Hahaha. Thanks!

wasabidreams August 1 2010, 13:34:24 UTC

Well, i don't really need to tell you how much i love your writing, you already know that... right?

lelouch7 July 29 2010, 15:36:30 UTC

this is intriguing
who's dead in pi's place?
love it more and more
thanks for sharing

redturtleotaku July 29 2010, 20:12:50 UTC

I'm glad that you're liking it more as it goes on! That's a great compliment.

More will be revealed soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

dunealia August 2 2010, 10:34:33 UTC

Squeee! Was not expecting this plot twist but am so enjoying it!