OH MY GOSH *O* I seem like only utter this line repeatedly *O* but this is ... wow~ It's been such a long time and your writing is still as wonderful as ever. I adore your characterization, though this one Kazuya is a bit ... confused ... a weak part of him but it's still loved "Kame shook his head, and Jin felt a crack forming in his heart. “You’ll use me,” the frightened man whispered, “you already admitted that you can’t control your urges.” His eyes were darting around Jin’s face, as though desperately seeking an element of hope. “What difference will it make? If you’re right about Nishikido then he’ll use me; if I go with you then you will; if I return to Yamashita then he will.” The gangster looked utterly lost." <=== Love this part a lot
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hope jin would be able to help him
will wait for the next part♥♥♥
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I seem like only utter this line repeatedly *O* but this is ... wow~
It's been such a long time and your writing is still as wonderful as ever.
I adore your characterization, though this one Kazuya is a bit ... confused ... a weak part of him but it's still loved
"Kame shook his head, and Jin felt a crack forming in his heart. “You’ll use me,” the frightened man whispered, “you already admitted that you can’t control your urges.” His eyes were darting around Jin’s face, as though desperately seeking an element of hope. “What difference will it make? If you’re right about Nishikido then he’ll use me; if I go with you then you will; if I return to Yamashita then he will.” The gangster looked utterly lost." <=== Love this part a lot ( ... )
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I'm not a fan of pwp, I always try to have some kind of storyline and characterization, so I'm glad that you feel I succeeded.
I'm working on the next part now. *hugs* Thanks for the comment!
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update again soon~ will be waiting~ ;D
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